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Official Origins Topic

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1Official Origins Topic Empty Official Origins Topic 29th August 2010, 1:19 pm

Celu

Celu

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MNI Board Chairman

Official Origins Topic Originsofficial

Origins is part of the Arc, (the other one being Altum Bellum), that explains how the world of Spherus Magna came to be.


Synopsis:
Origins starts with a group of Matoran finding the Great Being's Lab, and they start to read the inscriptions on the walls and learn about Spherus Magna's past.

Many billions of years ago, two large spiral galaxies collided. As the supermassive black holes collided at the center, a massive blast wave was sent out as well as ferocious jets of matter from the double-black hole, seeding the area around with elements, but tearing apart the galaxy as well. These waves of gases collided with a solar system nearby containing a rocky, barren world called Sphereus Magna. The waves of matter seeded it with the necessary elements to form protodermis.

Over the years, protodermis formed in the core of the planet and seeped through the surface, turning the barren world into a lush planet full of life. As the Glatorian and Agori evolve they form into 3 Tribes/ 3 Kingdoms, Stone Tribe (Roxtus), Magma Tribe (Magnacus), & Sea Tribe (Galo), two months after these Tribes form a Meteorite crashes in the north and the GBs start to mysteriously arrive. The three rulers of the kingdoms travel to greet and welcome the GBs.

While the leaders are travelling up north a jealous mysterious hermit starts lies between the tribes as the kingdoms start to dispute. These lies drive the tribes into killing their leaders when the return. As this is all happening the GBs start to test and alter the biology of reptiles in Spherus Magna’s Great Jungle. Disputes turn into skirmishes, skirmishes turn into battle as the Kingdom of Roxtus declares war.

Altum Bellum will continue the war, and how the kingdoms break into the other tribes and the Skrall evolve from them.



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2Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 8th September 2010, 10:34 am

Karmanu

Karmanu

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Okay guys. We need to get this project moving. The story is above this post. Start discussing.

Brainstorm any ideas you have here.

3Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 8th September 2010, 4:16 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Well we have the plot finished we need to get names and we're done.

4Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 9th September 2010, 4:36 pm

TheSkeletonMan939

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I think it'd be a little fun, for just the prologue and epilogue, to include descriptions of Matoran, Toa, Agori, and Glatorian working together. Tahu could ask Ackar about how Spherus Magna was created, Ackar would tell him that the Great Beings could have theorized the creation, they go to the cavern, and Tahu reads aloud the words on the walls to Ackar.

In the epilogue, Tahu could begin work with Kiina and Ackar to work with some disputes.

5Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 9th September 2010, 4:50 pm

Riglax

Riglax

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Yeah, why not? Also might wanna say that they also found a place for new Atero.

6Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 9th September 2010, 4:53 pm

Celu

Celu

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MNI Board Chairman

Very cool! Nice, to see someone following the PM I sent. Tongue

7Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 9th September 2010, 9:07 pm

TheSkeletonMan939

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Riglax wrote:Yeah, why not? Also might wanna say that they also found a place for new Atero.

Actually, that's Gali's mission right now, I believe, but I'll look at that.

8Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 9th September 2010, 10:16 pm

Legolover-361

Legolover-361

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TheSkeletonMan939 wrote:I think it'd be a little fun, for just the prologue and epilogue, to include descriptions of Matoran, Toa, Agori, and Glatorian working together. Tahu could ask Ackar about how Spherus Magna was created, Ackar would tell him that the Great Beings could have theorized the creation, they go to the cavern, and Tahu reads aloud the words on the walls to Ackar.
What about the idea I suggested in the other topic: We have an Agori, Matoran, or some other background character stumble upon the Great Beings' secret 'Wall of History', or whatever we will choose to call it; when they start reading, we move into the actual story.

However, I agree that we should include some Toa, Glatorian, and everyone else working together in the prologue and epilogue, too; that's a good idea, and it will bring into perspective how much Spherus Magna has changed over the years.

9Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 9th September 2010, 10:46 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Well remember we need to continue it through Altus Bellum maybe have in the Origins epilouge Ackar tell of the War. Shrugs

10Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 10th September 2010, 4:47 am

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Problem is that I don't think the GBs would write every detail down somewhere - they've always been the secretive type anyway.

What about we feature some old Agori/Glatorian who was the inside man of the Valley of the Maze? What I mean is that he knew everything that the GBs were doing thousands of years ago, and perhaps before the Shattering he went into stasis to prolong his lifespan.

After the reformation, perhaps this old guy wakes up and travels down to Bara Magna, finds out what happened from Ackar and co, and tells his story.

Just an idea.

11Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 10th September 2010, 10:37 am

Karmanu

Karmanu

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Hey guys, I had an idea last night. If you like it, then fine. If you don't like it, don't worry, cause this is just a suggestion.

Anyway, we can start the story out with the leaders leaving to meet with the Great Beings. The hermit comes, and his plan is to kill the leaders so that the villages will be overtaken by confusion and will most likely go to war. Once the war is over, the hermit plans to rule over all three villages. But there's on problem. A warrion from the fire tribe goes to all the villages, telling everyone he can that they shouldn't follow the hermit's plan. The hermit then hires an assassin from the rock tribe and a scholar from the water tribe to go after the warrior. The three of them end up facing off, but the fire warrior is able to convince the other two that the hermit is trying to get the village leaders killed for his own gain. The three hurry back to the villages, but the leaders have already been killed. They come back in time, though, to convince the villages to elect three new leaders, and they expose the hermit's plot and have him executed. The stone tribe's new leader, however, is corrupt and eventually his bad leadership makes the spark that will light the fire of war (aka Atlus Bellum).

Tell me what you guys think.

12Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 10th September 2010, 10:40 am

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

That might go with my ideas for the epilouge in the epilouge topic. Wink

13Official Origins Topic Empty Nice ideas here. 10th September 2010, 10:44 am

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

Yes, that would create some of the first plot in Origins. Although, we should first demonstrate some of the ancient Life of the Agori and Preliator. And you know have the the warrior living peacefully in the start, etc.

14Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 10th September 2010, 10:46 am

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Well I have the idea of a nice protagonist. It's in the epilouge planning topic. Wink

15Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 10th September 2010, 10:55 am

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

Maybe make the warrior the protagonist and have a different in Guild 2?

16Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 27th September 2010, 4:46 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Okay, guys we need ideas for like what the 3 powerful warriors in the tribes that kill the leaders. So what do you think they should do why the 3 leaders are gone visiting the GBs.

17Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 27th September 2010, 5:05 pm

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

Why the heck is this locked? Tongue Who locked it?

Pinned & Unclosed

18Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 28th September 2010, 9:41 am

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Guys well my idea is when the 3 leaders are gone we know the hermoit arrives and starts rumors (The leaders are going to the GBs to get help in destroying the tribes) between the tribes they start to fight not battles but small fights then they decided to kill the 3 leaders when they return so they do. Then Noca (New Magma Tribe Leader) finds out that the hermit was lying and trying to take over so the hermit is exacuted they omly leader to agree with Raginus is Pravu (new Sea Tribe leader) but Pior (new stone tribe leader) is still on the side of the Hermit (Armatus). So the stone tribe starts to gather armies of other a minor species (Skralae, ancestor of the Skrall). A scout from the Sea tribe (will be unnamed) finds that the stone tribe is going to take the other tribes to war. So the Magma and Sea tribe unite into one large army and ready for an attack. Both tribes then recieve a written document from Pior saying they are declaring war. Then the next day after when the two tribes least expect it the stone tribe breaks through both of the tribes fortresses and the kill hslf of the armies but yet the war is just beggining.

19Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 28th September 2010, 11:27 am

Legolover-361

Legolover-361

MNI COO

MNI COO

I suppose the Element Lords' creation will be in response to this war, Altus Bellum?

20Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 28th September 2010, 2:21 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Nope! The response was the GBs becoming th leaders and the 7 tribes forming. Wink

21Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 28th September 2010, 3:22 pm

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

I like Naruto's version:
Anyway, we can start the story out with the leaders leaving to meet with the Great Beings. The hermit comes, and his plan is to kill the leaders so that the villages will be overtaken by confusion and will most likely go to war. Once the war is over, the hermit plans to rule over all three villages. But there's on problem. A warrion from the fire tribe goes to all the villages, telling everyone he can that they shouldn't follow the hermit's plan. The hermit then hires an assassin from the rock tribe and a scholar from the water tribe to go after the warrior. The three of them end up facing off, but the fire warrior is able to convince the other two that the hermit is trying to get the village leaders killed for his own gain. The three hurry back to the villages, but the leaders have already been killed. They come back in time, though, to convince the villages to elect three new leaders, and they expose the hermit's plot and have him executed. The stone tribe's new leader, however, is corrupt and eventually his bad leadership makes the spark that will light the fire of war (aka Atlus Bellum).

Mixing them up would be cool.

22Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 28th September 2010, 3:56 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Mixing? What does that mean?

23Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 28th September 2010, 4:14 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Well I like Naruto's so we'll use that.

24Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 28th September 2010, 4:17 pm

Riglax

Riglax

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MNI CEO

I mean using the best of both. Tongue

Anyways.

25Official Origins Topic Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 28th September 2010, 4:28 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Yeah I'll work on merging the ideas then I think the storyboard is done.

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