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General Info/ Facts
-The Text will be 3rd Person.
-Invidior is younger than Osavus.
-The henchmen work together and have been acting for sometime now.
-Prototype Robot features:
BS01 wrote:The prototype is fully mechanical and incorporates none of the nanotechnology used in the Matoran Universe. It had an unstable power source, which was the cause of its destruction. Also unlike the Matoran Universe, there was no spirit guiding the robot, making it non-sentient. The robot does have a number of offensive and defensive arrays, and is capable of emitting power and gravitational beams. It is approximately 27,000,000 feet tall, two-thirds the height of the Matoran Universe.
Storyboard
Main:TGC Storyboard
- Spoiler:
- The Grand Creation begins at a time we're the Great Beings are still ruling Spherus Magna. They decide to construct an experiment beyond any imagination, wanting to test the limits of their power. They begin planning a giant robot, a 27,000,000 feet tall, fully functioning mechanoid. They begun constructing it, close to the Valley of the Maze. Using Construction Robots they are making progress. At one point they state a fact. How would they manipulate from inside? How would they construct, path to check it's mechanisms? Invidior, a GB finds the solution. He designs the Gravity Stabilizers allowing them to create gravity from any angle.
The stabilizers are a success. Invidior asks to be in-charge of that part of the robot, but the Great Beings deny it to him. He starts to get angry. And at the point, he believes he must destroy the robot, because of how jealous he is.
Osavus meanwhile, a wise GB, strongly supports with his words that they must not build such thing. Because it might be dangerous. Once Invidior, meets with Osavus, they talk and Invidior convinces him to sabotage it. But they shall need help.
An Agori, who has heard them talking; see the opportunity. If he helps them he can later request for a job at the Valley of the Maze. He meets Osavus, and tells him he can find the best henchmen on Spherus Magna, that if paid, will do anything. They hire them, promising that they will give them the best implants they got.
But Varonis plays on both sides. He goes and tells some other Great Beings, so he'd can assure a place at the Great Beings' Maze.
Before they can act, the henchmen strike. They attack the moment the Great Beings are ready to put the final leg into the robot and lock it. They destroy most of the holding ropes, and the leg collapses down.
But now, the Great Beings consul acts. Heremus pulls a team together. He gather the best of the Glatorian, and creates a team of five Glatorain. Ackar, Rohkea and Casiria.
Before they do anything, the Henchmen try to shut down the Construction Robots. Through this adventure Invidior becomes jealous of the powers of the robot and wants them for himself. But, the team stops them, with a bit of help from three Agori Varonis, Galintis and Pomiris.
This time Invdior is not going to wait. He dumbs the henchmen along with Osavus and they go to do the jobs for themselves. The henchmen are not happy they didn't get any money or implants and they hunt them down. At the moment they try to sabotage the power source of the robot, they are cached by the team, the three Agori and Heremus with Angonce. There Invidior shouts at Varonis who is exposed completely. He tries to outrun everyone but the henchmen arrive. As he tries to turn back, he thinks of a new plan. Take the power source and sell it. Avarus, the henchmen leader tries to stop him, but they are both killed by the calibration bots of the power source.
Then the team fights the henchmen; each of them is beaten. Osavus understands him mistake and tries to turn over. Invidior meanwhile tickles with the power source making it unstable. And escapes along with Osavus and the three remaining henchmen to the base of the henchmen which is close to the city of Roxtus. While the other believe they are both dead.
The Team later is assigned by the Great Beings as a law keeping of the Fire Tribe. THe robot starts, and they are ready. Tests are completed. After a few days, the robot explodes. The parts of the robot crash all over the place, and the head falls on Roxtus. They all die, except Invidior.
Usable Characters
Main: TGC Characters Topic
GBs:
Invidior - Mad GB (ROS)
Osavus
Heremus
Angonce
Unamed GBs
(old poll)
Agori & Glatorian (A&G)
Robur - Henchman
Silex - Henchman
Avarus - Henchman
Ferveon - Henchman
Raanu (younger version)
Ackar (younger version)
Sequel
TGC will have a small serial, Price of Jealousy, (5 Chapters) where Invidior's story will develop, until the moment he touches the Ignika and becomes mad. At the End he's placed on the Fortress.
Links
TGC Storyboard -- View a full updated description of the story and analytically all the chapters.
TGC Characters Topic -- Info on the characters
Price of Jealousy -- Sequel
Last edited by Riglax on 6th August 2011, 9:21 am; edited 18 times in total
<-- That's me and Gelu. XD We're BFF's. I totally 
and 
him. 
Can we PLEASE put him in!