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Okay, so we need scripts for our comics.
This makes it a lot easier for artists like me, to make them.
Here's and example of a comic script.
The exact dialog is not quite so important right now, but we need an idea of what they are talking about and what they will be doing from panel to panel.
Episode 1 Script by Lewa Krom
Episode 2 script by Legolover
Script Outlines
EPISODE 1
This episode was completed by LK already, I could't find the outlines for it but basically all the Toa wake up, visit their villages, hear the Legend of Mata Nui, gather and then split off to collect the masks.
EPISODE 2
Already completed by Legolover, this is pretty much what he did (I think).
EPISODE 3
This episode will most certainly need some filler scenes to make it longer and add some more action. I was thinking we'd include Onua fighting an Earth Elemental from the unreleased game.(We could make it a Vatuka instead)
We don't see much of Onua, and we could do a nice tribute to a game that was never released.
EPISODE 4
Nothing much to say about this one. It's where there the Toa find their unity (The message is working together).
EPISODE 5
Probably the most epic of the episodes. Not quite sure how the beginning battle is supposed to go. though
EPISODE 6
I thought that we should wait to have Takua visit Ta-Koro. This episode is the first time Takua meets Jaller and Vakama (after losing his memory).
This one, like episode 3, is heavily based on MNOLG, and will need some extra scenes. I had 2 different ideas for this.
We could just add in some scenes with the Toa collecting the last of their masks and also add the scenes with Takua forming the Chroniclers company.
We could have filler scenes with the Toa collecting their Makoki stones (never before seen, we'd get complete freedom with these scenes).
Or we could have flashbacks from Takua's quest for the Toa stones. These flashbacks would be very loosely based on the Quest for the Toa GBA game.
What do you guys think?
EPISODE 7
This episode would continue from the last episode. It will be about the toa decending into Makuta's lair while the Chroniclers company defend Kini-Nui from Rahi and will include the Battle for Kini-nui and the Manas battle.
One thing I thought I would change is that Takua does not pass out when he receives his visions, instead he gets glimpses while he's still conscious. Only for the last vision when he is knocked out in battle, does he completely black out. I did this so that I could show more of the Toa's scenes and I felt that Takua going unconscious all the time is a bit inconvenient when Rahi loom ahead.
Apart from that, I stayed pretty close to canon on this one, although i think a few things could be changed to improve the story, like the Manas fight could include more Manas to make the battle more epic or the way that the Toa receive their Golden Kanohi could be more like how they got them in MNOLG.
EPISODE 8
The final battle with Makuta, the toa will battle their shadow selves while Takua races to the Great Sundial in Onu-Koro so that he could witness the Toa's triumph.
This makes it a lot easier for artists like me, to make them.
Here's and example of a comic script.
The exact dialog is not quite so important right now, but we need an idea of what they are talking about and what they will be doing from panel to panel.
Episode 1 Script by Lewa Krom
Episode 2 script by Legolover
Script Outlines
EPISODE 1
This episode was completed by LK already, I could't find the outlines for it but basically all the Toa wake up, visit their villages, hear the Legend of Mata Nui, gather and then split off to collect the masks.
EPISODE 2
Already completed by Legolover, this is pretty much what he did (I think).
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- Spoiler:
- • Takua returns to the beach and is greeted by a Ga-Matoran named Macku
• Macku explains that he village has been attacked by a Tarakava
• Macku searches for Gali on foot while Takua takes her boat to Ga-Koro to help
• Gali is trapped by the infected waters of the Makuta
• Lewa sees the commotion from a distance and rushes to her aid
• They discuss their thoughts on the other Toa
• Gali voices her concern over the lack of unity in the Toa
• Angered that the Toa did not remain united, Tahu returns to Ta-Koro
• Jaller informs Tahu of the location of the Kanohi Akaku
• Lewa approaches a cave where he believes his Miru is located and attacks the Nui-Jaga guarding it
• Defeating the Nui-Jaga, Lewa enters the cave
• Entering a pool within the cave, Lewa recovers the Kakama but is attacked by seaweed controlled by the Makuta
• Lewa escapes from the plants with the Kakama
• Takua arrives at the gates of Ga-Koro and enters
• Inside Takua finds Ga-Koro empty of all villagers
• Takua finds destroyed huts, floating pads, and tools
• Takua finds a pump mechanism along with a tube for air for a hut with the entire population of Ga-Koro
• Turaga Nokama tells Takua to find a lightstone and search for the missing piece
• Gali continues and encounters another Tarakava
• Gali manages to trap the Tarakava in a sea cave by using the Taravaka’s agility against itself
• Gali surfaces and sees Maku running towards her.
• Takua takes a lightstone from Turaga Nokama’s hut and descends underwater
• Takua, with the help of Turaga Nokama, finds the missing gear
• Takua returns to the surface and places the gear into its slot
• The hut resurfaces
• The return of the hut attracts the attention of the Tarakava once more
• The Tarakava, about to strike Takua, is attacked by Gali
• During the struggle, Gali and the Tarakava fell into the water
• After much suspense, Gali returns to the surface with the Tarakava’s infected mask
• Tahu travels to Onu-Wahi where he finds a large cavern
• Crossing a long bridge over a deep pit within the cavern, Tahu is attacked by a swarm of Kofo-Jaga
• Realizing that his Fire is feeding them, Tahu flips around the bridge, flinging the attached Kofo-Jaga to the chasm below
• One Kofo-Jaga remaining, Tahu sees an Infected Mask
• Tahu removes the Infected Mask but it falls into the chasm
• Tahu retrieves the Akaku
• Afterwards, Takua talks to Turaga Nokama and Nixie
• Takua, while conversating with Macku, Hahli, and Nixie, learns that something strange has happened in Po-Koro
• Macku who is very worried about Hewkii, begs Takua to investigate, as she has been ordered by Nokama not to go herself.
• Takua agrees and a Ga-koro boat driver takes Takua to the shores Po-Wahi.
EPISODE 3
This episode will most certainly need some filler scenes to make it longer and add some more action. I was thinking we'd include Onua fighting an Earth Elemental from the unreleased game.(We could make it a Vatuka instead)
We don't see much of Onua, and we could do a nice tribute to a game that was never released.
- V Click to show V
- Spoiler:
- • Takua arrives at the shores Po-Wahi.
• Takua arrives at the shores Po-Wahi.
• Takua meets a trader on the shoreline and learns that a sickness is spreading around Po-Koro
• Takua travels onwards to Po-Koro• Onua enters a giant cavern with a pool in the center and a hole in the top that lets the sun throughThis scene has been cut for now
• Onua encounters Kapura slowly wandering through a cavern, Onua runs to him
• Kapura at first thinks he's the Makuta, but then realizes he's one of the toa, he goes on about Tahu, Vakama, Jaller and why he moves slowly
• Kapura then tells Onua that one of his masks is rumored to be hidden within a cave in a nearby mountain
• Onua departs
• Takua meets Hafu on his way to Po-Koro as the Po-Matoran works on a carving
• Hafu, busy with his work, points Takua to Po-Koro and then resumes carving
• Onua travels up some cliffs in search of his Kanohi Huna, he enters a cave in the side of a cliff
• Onua realizes that this is the nest of a Fikou-Nui! The giant spider attacks
• Onua battles the Fikou-Nui and defeats it, he continues through the cave and finds his Huna
• Onua continues through a series of caves using his Ruru to light the way, he encounters a Nui-Jaga(this part could be cut as a Nui-jaga will be used later)
• Takua arrives where a Kohlii salesmen tries to sell him a new type of Kohlii ball called a comet, Takua ignores him and walks towards Hewkii’s hut
• Takua sees that Hewkii is very ill
• He walks to a kohlii field where a lonely Po-matoran is kicking around a comet, the Matoran tells him about them, he then decides to take a break and walks off leaving behind his Kohlii-ball
• Takua looks at the comet suspiciously and takes it with him to Turaga Onewa
• Turaga Onewa informs Takua that the Kolhii ball is in fact infected
• Turaga Onewa, who is now worried to find that a matoran has been working for the Makuta, directs him to a bazaar where the Kolhii balls are sold.
• Takua finds the owner seems to be missing
• investigating the Kolhii balls on display, Takua finds a mysterious key
• Onua returns to Onu-Koro and meets Whenua at the Amja pit, Whenua tells him that an earth elemental lurks in the caves nearby. Earth elementals are immune to mask attacks
• In the quarry, Takua finds a place for the mysterious key he found
• Takua enters a cave unlocked by the key
• Takua discovers an infected mask contaminating the Comets
• Takua sees that a Nui-Jaga is guarding them
• Pohatu comes to Takua's rescue after receiving a message from the Ta-Koro Guard
• Pohatu is blinded by the Nui-Jaga
• Takua aids Pohatu in kicking boulders at the Nui-Jaga
• Takua and Pohatu destroy the nest which collapses on top of the Nui-Jaga
• Pohatu and Takua return to Po-koro to tell the news
• Onua descends deep underground in search of his Kakau, he encounters the Earth elemental, a giant beast made of mud and rock
• Onua, unable to use his mask powers in the creature's presence, he is forced to rely on his earth powers
• Onua is nearly killed by the beast, but he finds realizes he is near an underground reservoir of water, at the last second he breaks through the rock
• water rushes in through the hole and washes the creature away, Onua finds a Kaukau on the wall of the cave and used it to breath underwater
• Turaga Onewa orders the Po-Matoran and Pohatu to dump the Comets into the sea
• Turaga Onewa organizes a party on the lookout for Ahkmou and gives Takua a chisel
• Takua departs from Po-koro where Pohatu walks alongside him
• Pohatu and Takua exchange a few kind words before Pohatu runs off into the distance pursuing his own quest.
• Takua admires the landscape as he continues his journey.
• Kopaka travels across a lake of lava trying to reach Kanohi Pakari using and ice bridge
• The ice bridge shatters, a large chunk of ice knocking him unconscious
• Kopaka has a vision of Kini Nui, Akamai, and Wairuha
EPISODE 4
Nothing much to say about this one. It's where there the Toa find their unity (The message is working together).
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- Spoiler:
- • Takua finds himself in Onu-Wahi where he reaches a cave with an Onu-Matoran named Midak guarding it
• Midak gives Pewku to Takua so that Takua can travel to Onu-Koro
• Lewa flies through the air of Le-Wahi
• A Nui-Rama knocks Lewa’s mask off and the Toa falls towards the gaping jaws of a Muaka
• Onua dives and rescues Lewa from the Muaka
• [Opening Theme]
• Kopaka awakens and finds himself on a quickly melting iceberg on the lava lake
• Kopaka uses his Pakari and tries to jump across the lava lake but realizes he won’t make it
• An updraft caused by Lewa rescues him
• Kopaka theorizes that the vision is from Makuta
• Lewa tells Kopaka that Onua has called a meeting
• Takua meets with Turaga Whenua
• Takua explores the Great Mine and learns that they’ve reached a impenetrable layer of rock
• Takua meets with the Chief Mining Prospector, Mamru, who tells him about a Sundial
• Mamru requests Takua to take a letter to Nixie
• Mamru gives Takua the gnomon and sends Takua off
• Gali climbs to the top of a mountain and finds a Miru
• Grabbing the Miru, the mountain collapses beneath her
• Using the Miru, Gali brings herself slowly to the ground but is surrounded by two Nui-Jaga and two Tarakava
• Gali is rescued by Tahu, but is knocked underwater by a Nui-Jaga
• Unconscious underwater, Gali has a vision of Akamai and Wairuha, unlike Kopaka, it’s much more clear and she doesn’t think it’s a trick of the Makuta
• She wakes up and wants to know more
• Takua takes Pewku back to Midak but finds Midak missing
• Takua and Pewku search for Midak and find that several Fikou have captured him
• Takua and Pewku rush into battle and defeat the Fikou, rescuing Midak
• Leaving Pewku with Midak, Takua travels back through Po-Wahi to his boat
The Toa all fight, alone at first, against the Nui-Rama and Tarakava
• Several of the Toa are ambushed by Muaka, Kane-Ra, and Nui-Jaga
• Working together as a team, Tahu, Gali, Lewa, and Kopaka hold off many of the Rahi while Onua and Pohatu dig a trench to redirect the lava flow
• Onua and Pohatu rejoin the other Toa and defeat the remaining Rahi
• The Toa agree to work together to find the remaining masks
• Sailing to Ga-Koro, a storm hits and Takua’s boat is flung around the sea, nearly hitting several large jutting rocks
• Takua hears the voice of the Makuta telling him to turn away or be killed
• Takua’s boat crashes into a rock, shattering the boat
EPISODE 5
Probably the most epic of the episodes. Not quite sure how the beginning battle is supposed to go. though
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- Spoiler:
- • Gali, Onua, and Kopaka defeat a Tarakava, Gali diving in and recovering Tahu’s Miru
• Onua is curious as to the location of Lewa
• Lewa is searching for one of his kanohi,
• An invisible foe attacks him from behind
• [Opening theme]
• Takua is quickly rescued by a ship of Ga-Matoran including Nixie
• Giving Nixie the letter, she tells Takua to use a lightstone and imitate 4:00 on the gnomon at the sundial
• Takua, having traveled back to Onu-Wahi, journeys into a side tunnel labeled Le-Wahi
• Takua finds a large group of Onu-Matoran finishing up the construction of the tunnel
• Takua talks to Taipu who explains what they’re doing just as Taipu makes the hammer hit that opens up the way to Le-Wahi
• Takua decides to travel through Le-Wahi, taking Taipu with him
• Takua and Taipu travel through the jungle exchanging stories when a Nui-Rama swoops by and kidnaps Taipu
• Takua hurries to Le-Koro to try to get help but finds the village deserted
• Takua, exhausted, finds a flute and begins to play it
• Several Le-Matoran swoop in on vines and pop out of bushes
• Takua speaks with Kongu and Tamaru about what’s happened and learns that the village has been kidnapped by Nui-Rama
• A dark cloud of Nui-Rama in the North forms
• The Le-Matoran begin to climb on Gukkos as an attack group against the Nui-Rama
• Kongu allows for Takua to ride Ka with him and attack the Nui-Rama
• At the head of the attack force, Takua hits several Nui-Rama
• Eventually, they reach the Hive and see the rest of the Le-Matoran as well as Turaga Matau
• They are ambushed and trapped with the rest of the Le-Matoran
• Turaga Matau reveals to Takua that the Makuta has infected Lewa
• Lewa, infected, rides in atop a Nui-Kopen
• Lewa lands and approaches Takua, warning Takua to stop interfering
• Takua defiantly says no to Lewa
• Lewa attacks Takua, who is rescued by Turaga Matau, Taipu, and others and they hold off Lewa from harming Takua
• Onua arrives in the Hive and is attacked by the infected Lewa
• Onua knocks the infected mask off of Lewa’s face
• Onua uses his Matatu to retrieve Lewa’s regular Kanohi from the Nui-Kopen
• Lewa and Onua use their Komau to control several Nui-Kopen to fly the Le-Matoran, Turaga Matau, and Takua back to Le-Koro
• Afterwards there is a celebration in Le-Koro
• Takua talks to Turaga Matau who gives Takua a flutesong that summons a Kahu to take him anywhere
• Taipu decides to return with Onua to Onu-Koro
• Takua heads off again leaving the Le-Koro Celebration
EPISODE 6
I thought that we should wait to have Takua visit Ta-Koro. This episode is the first time Takua meets Jaller and Vakama (after losing his memory).
This one, like episode 3, is heavily based on MNOLG, and will need some extra scenes. I had 2 different ideas for this.
We could just add in some scenes with the Toa collecting the last of their masks and also add the scenes with Takua forming the Chroniclers company.
We could have filler scenes with the Toa collecting their Makoki stones (never before seen, we'd get complete freedom with these scenes).
Or we could have flashbacks from Takua's quest for the Toa stones. These flashbacks would be very loosely based on the Quest for the Toa GBA game.
What do you guys think?
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- Spoiler:
- • Takua arrives on beach where he started and passes by the lessened lava flow
• Takua wanders through the charred forest, lost, he follows a trail of marked trees until he reaches a slow-moving ta-matoran named Kapura
• Kapura mistakes Takua for the Makuta, then after realizing his mistake, goes on to explain the Makuta, Jaller, Ta-Koro and Vakama
• Kapura directs Takua to Ta-Koro and instructs him to visit Vakama, the village elder
• Takua arrives in Ta-Koro and meets with Jaller
• The Ta-matoran, who are wary of travelers, are uneasy around Takua
• Takua receives a lavaboard from a random Matoran who was told to hold on to it
• Takua meets Vakama and for the first time hears his name
• [Opening theme]
• Vakama and Takua talk a bit about the past
• Takua leaves and on his way, he is again approached by Jaller
• Jaller tells Takua about some missing Guard members who were lost in the North March
• Jaller gives him ensign of the Guard to travel there
• Takua travels along a path alongside a mountain in Ta-Wahi to cable car
• Traveling on the cable car, Takua arrives in the Drifts of Ko-Wahi
• Takua finds a Ta-Matoran outpost abandoned and recovers a heatstone
• Takua travels back out into the drifts and finds a Matoran frozen in ice
• Using the heatstone, Takua frees the Matoran
• The Ko-Matoran flees from Takua, who follows him to a cave.
• In the cave he finds the Ko-Matoran, Kopeke
• The Ko-Matoran, Kopeke, tells Takua that the Ta-Matoran were killed by the Makuta who lead them into the ice
• Takua travels back into the snow and travels to Ko-Koro
• In Ko-Koro, Takua tries to talk with Turaga Nuju but soon learns that he can’t understand him
• One of the Ko-Matoran informs Takua that he will need to find Matoro to translate the Turaga
• Takua travels through a narrow passage back into the Drifts
• Takua starts following a trail of red flags into the snow
• Takua follows these flags and comes across a rock that says “Beware The Swarm”
• Takua falls unconscious from the intense cold
• Takua awakens to see that Matoro has found him
• Takua hears a growl and sees a Muaka attacking Matoro
• Kopaka arrives and fights the Muaka, confusing it using his Mahiki
• Kopaka rescues Matoro and Takua, taking them back to Ko-Koro
• In Ko-Koro, Matoro translates Nuju who tells Takua to form a company of Matoran to aid the Toa in their final mission
• Nuju gives Takua a note to give to all the Turaga
• Takua departs from Ko-Koro to complete his mission
• Takua speaks with Jaller in Ta-Koro and informs him of the North march he then leaves to bring Nuju's message to Vakama
• Vakama explains that Takua's company is to defend Kini-Nui from Makuta's Rahi as the Toa descend into Makuta's lair to confront him and tells him how to get to Kini-Nui
• Vakama sends his left-hand: Kapura to accompany Takua and after Takua runs into him traveling from Ko-Koro to Ta-Koro, the two continue on to recruit more Matoran into their fellowship
• We see short scenes from the other villages as Takua recruits Kopeke, Tamaru, Taipu, Hafu, and finally Macku
• The Chronicler's Company has been assembled and the band of misfits set off in Macku's canoe to sail underneath Naho Falls to begin their journey to Kini-Nui
EPISODE 7
This episode would continue from the last episode. It will be about the toa decending into Makuta's lair while the Chroniclers company defend Kini-Nui from Rahi and will include the Battle for Kini-nui and the Manas battle.
One thing I thought I would change is that Takua does not pass out when he receives his visions, instead he gets glimpses while he's still conscious. Only for the last vision when he is knocked out in battle, does he completely black out. I did this so that I could show more of the Toa's scenes and I felt that Takua going unconscious all the time is a bit inconvenient when Rahi loom ahead.
Apart from that, I stayed pretty close to canon on this one, although i think a few things could be changed to improve the story, like the Manas fight could include more Manas to make the battle more epic or the way that the Toa receive their Golden Kanohi could be more like how they got them in MNOLG.
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- Spoiler:
• The Toa emerge from the forest and approach the temple of Kini-Nui
• Around the temple stand maskless statues of themselves, the ponder their use before placing their Kanohi on them
• Once all their masks have been placed, the statues begin to glow, the kanohi morph into Golden Kanohi and as these masks formed, the Toa receive their Makoki stones
• The statues then crumble to dust
• The chronicler's company emerges from an underground waterway and forested hills
• They look over the cliff and see remnants of a broken bridge, Tamaru swings over and secures a rope allowing the others to cross
• The Company emerges from the woods to and into rocky mountains to find their path blocked by fallen rocks
• Taipu and Hafu quickly work at clearing the rock, Hafu takes the time to carve a statue of himself while doing this
• the Company ascends higher into snow-capped mountains and reaches the portal to Kini-Nui
• Kopeke fashions a key out of ice and uses it open the gates
• The Company arrives in Kini-Nui and approach the Toa who are in argument of how to proceed
• After some discussion the Company agrees to defend Kini-Nui from Rahi who intend to attack from behind, while the Toa descend to fight Makuta
• Before the Toa part, Gali stopped Takua and establishes a mental link with him so he can Chronicle the battle against Makuta if the Toa do not return
• The Toa walk up to the Suva Kaita, activating the Makoki stones which float to the center of the Suva to form a sphere
• The sections of the Suva descend creating lowering stairs transporting the Toa underground
• The Matoran look up to the horizon to see that a horde of Rahi is approaching, they ready themselves
• The Toa finish their descent and enter the gate to Mangaia
• The Toa discuss how they will proceed, Gali and Kopaka recall their visions of the Toa-Kaita
• They agree to separate into two different rooms where they fuse to become Akamai and Wairuha
• They go their separate ways
• The Matoran have their own problems as they are attacked by a swarm of Nui-Rama, the Matoran manage to repel this group with their disks but more Rahi are coming, Takua gets another vision
•The Toa-Kaita arrive at the entrance to Makuta's lair, the Manas crabs emerge fro the shadows and attack
• A greater force of Rahi made up of Tarakava, Muaka tigers, and other Rahi attack, the Matoran are fighting hard and manage to defeat a few but more keep on coming
• Even the newly formed Toa-Kaita are evenly matched by the Manas, and cannot get the advantage over them
• The Manas seem to be toying with the Toa as they surround them, the Toa-Kaita fear the worst
• Disks fly and several Matoran lose their masks in the struggle, the matoran are still able to hold their own with the second wave of Rahi
• But then the Matoran look up in horror as huge Rahi burst from the forest
• The Matoran retreat to the Kini-Nui temple, surrounded by the new army of Rahi they face certain death
• But then they look to the skies to see Kongu's Kahu fleet flying to the rescue
• The ground opens up as Onepu's Ussalry bursts through and Jaller and his Ta-Koro Guard can be seen throwing disks at the Rahi attackers
• The battle takes a turn and the Matoran charge a the Rahi, in the battle Takua is knocked unconscious
• The Toa-Kaita on the verge of defeat, notice strange towers surrounding the landscape, Akamai attacks one of these by accident and Wairuha notices the Manas pause as they do this
• Wairuha instructs Akamai to destroy all the towers as he joins in too, the manas desperately try to stop the Toa but to no avail
• The now weakened Manas are no match for the Toa-kaita who make quick work of the Manas
• The Toa-Kaita proceed into Makuta's lair only to be defused by Makuta's destructive power
• Gali sends a psychic message to Takua that her visions will end here and that Takua must find them and record their battle with Makuta
• Takua slowly wakes up as Macku stands over him
• Takua sees that the Matoran have defeated the Rahi, Matoran rejoice but Takua still has one more mission
• Onepu tells Takua that something has happened to the sundial, and Whenua needs to speak with him
• Takua is given Pewku who he rides towards Onu-Koro
EPISODE 8
The final battle with Makuta, the toa will battle their shadow selves while Takua races to the Great Sundial in Onu-Koro so that he could witness the Toa's triumph.
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- Spoiler:
- •Takua and Pewku race through the underground passages to Onu-Koro and continue on to Whenua's hut
• When the Toa enter the main chamber, they encounter a huge void that seems to fill the chamber
• Suddenly Makuta's voice booms throughout the room, taunting and ridiculing the Toa
• Then six shadow forms appear in front of the Toa, each matching one of the Toa's shapes
• Jumping into combat, the Toa battle the Shadow Toa
• Turaga Whenua explains to Takua that there is another passage to Mangaia: through the mysterious Sundial area Takua had found earlier
• Takua thanks Turaga Whenua and runs to the Sundial
• Fighting an equal match the Toa can't win and they slowly begin to weaken
• The Toa realize no one can defeat their own shadow counterpart, they acknowledge the shadow is a part of them
• The Toa are able to re-absorb their counterparts
• The Toa proceed to Makuta's Lair
• Takua proceeds downward where he reaches the Sundial
• To his surprise he sees that the Golden Hau that had been floating inside it had disappeared
• Touching the pillar, and with a sudden plunge the platform begins to descend
• It soon reaches the bottom of a dark chamber, where Takua discovered the disabled Manas scattered around
• When he approaches a tall, glowing green, open door he quietly walked through
• The Toa enter the chamber and looked up into a column stationed in the middle of the room, a swirling vortex of objects
• Calling out to Makuta, informing him of their arrival, he appears
• The Toa are stunned to see a small Matoran, completely pitted and rusted with an Infected Mask, walking towards, blank eyes staring from empty sockets, and proclaiming that he was what they were sworn to protect
• Kopaka warns Tahu that this is a trick, and after several comments were exchanged, the Matoran reveals himself to be The Makuta
• His body is absorbed by the vortex, in its place, a dark energy swarming, the Infected Mask rose high and the tentacles swirled around the Toa, reaching out to them
• No matter how hard they try to evade an attack from the Master of Shadows, no defense seemed to measure up against it
• Slowly, the Makuta ceases his attack and gazed down at his tired and utterly defeated opponents
• In a final attempt, the Toa join together in an elemental blast directed towards the Makuta, summoning everything they can muster
• Instantly, the swirling vortex of objects withers and collapses, and the infected mask disappears after he warns the Toa that they can not destroy him, for he is nothing
• When Teridax was defeated, some of the scattered metal pieces making up the vortex collapses on Takua
• Beams of white energy teleports the Toa back to the surface of Mata Nui as the lone Matoran emerges from the debris
• Takua emerges from under the remains of Makuta's "vortex" form
• At the other end of the room, a large, circular door, with the same sign on it as Takua had once seen in a dream, opens
• Takua enters the room to see a massive hive-like structure
• As he approaches, red eyes can be seen through
• A pod opens and the creature emerges
• Takua attempts to flee as more pods opens, he runs to a golden sphere, but there is a piece missing, which Takua recognizes
• He searches in his pack for the object he was thinking of, tossing away everything he has to find it
• Having been successful in his search, he slams the Po-Koro Chisel into the sphere, and is soon surrounded by a bubble of energy
• The bubble then swiftly transports Takua up to the top of the chamber and through a tunnel, tossing him out through the Bohrok Nest Portal, onto the Ta-Wahi Beach
• Turaga Vakama is waiting there, and congratulates Takua for proving him wrong, thinking Takua had been killed, as well as the Ta-Matoran, who feared that he would bring bad luck
• Then, as fireworks go off, Takua and Vakama walk back to Ta-Koro together, and the Red Star glows brighter than ever
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