The Federation of Fear comic is assigned to Tohkann. This will be the trial comic series for KANOHI.novus Comics. All scripting and updates on development will take place here.
Finalized scripts should ALWAYS be merged into this first post for clarity and ease of access.
Chapter 1
Page One
Panel 1
Vezon is surrounded by Zyglak.
Panel 2
Portal opens behind Vezon
Credits at the bottom of Page One.
Page Two + Onwards
Panel 3 - From Vezon's POV
Everything is blurry. Eye opens to see four shadows in a cell, standing apart.
Panel 4 - From Vezon's POV
Things become clear. Cell setting apparent. Four distinct shapes with identity shrouded.
Panel 5
Close up of Brutaka, saying what he says at that point.
Panel 6
Side angle as Roodaka graps at the cell bars while in partial shadow.
Panel 7
Brutaka leans down on Roodaka.
Panel 8 - Perspective view with emphasis on Brutaka's size.
Brutaka: All of you have something in common – you have all had dealings with the Brotherhood of Makuta.
Panel 9 - Closeup of Roodaka
Brutaka: Roodaka, here, betrayed them to the Dark Hunters, then betrayed the Dark Hunters as well – now both sides want her dead.
Panel 10 - Closeup of Takadox and Carapar
Brutaka: Takadox and Carapar over there are Barraki, whose armies were crushed 80,000 years ago by the Brotherhood.
Panel 11 - Closeup of Spiriah
Brutaka: The Makuta in the corner is Spiriah, who fouled up an experiment on the island of Zakaz so badly that his own people marked him for death.
Panel 12
Vezon puts his hand up with a confused expression.
Bubble 1
Vezon: Excuse me, oh brutal, blade-wielding, lover of gardening.
Bubble 2
Vezon: I have never met any Makuta face to mask and wouldn’t know one if he stepped on me and ground me into the dirt.
Panel 13
Vezok's face appearing in a thought bubble of Vezon's.
Vezon: I think maybe you wanted someone else ... I’m Vezon with an 'n,' you see, not Vezok with a 'k,' and --
Panel 14
Carapar already has Vezon's neck in his grasp with motion lines indicating the motion.
Panel 15
Carapar throws Vezon into a wall and says what he says.
Panel 16
Brutaka looks downcast and downwards, saying what he says.
Chapter one concludes with:
To be continued in Federation of Fear - Chapter 2.
Finalized scripts should ALWAYS be merged into this first post for clarity and ease of access.
Chapter 1
Page One
Panel 1
Vezon is surrounded by Zyglak.
Panel 2
Portal opens behind Vezon
Credits at the bottom of Page One.
Page Two + Onwards
Panel 3 - From Vezon's POV
Everything is blurry. Eye opens to see four shadows in a cell, standing apart.
Panel 4 - From Vezon's POV
Things become clear. Cell setting apparent. Four distinct shapes with identity shrouded.
Panel 5
Close up of Brutaka, saying what he says at that point.
Panel 6
Side angle as Roodaka graps at the cell bars while in partial shadow.
Panel 7
Brutaka leans down on Roodaka.
Panel 8 - Perspective view with emphasis on Brutaka's size.
Brutaka: All of you have something in common – you have all had dealings with the Brotherhood of Makuta.
Panel 9 - Closeup of Roodaka
Brutaka: Roodaka, here, betrayed them to the Dark Hunters, then betrayed the Dark Hunters as well – now both sides want her dead.
Panel 10 - Closeup of Takadox and Carapar
Brutaka: Takadox and Carapar over there are Barraki, whose armies were crushed 80,000 years ago by the Brotherhood.
Panel 11 - Closeup of Spiriah
Brutaka: The Makuta in the corner is Spiriah, who fouled up an experiment on the island of Zakaz so badly that his own people marked him for death.
Panel 12
Vezon puts his hand up with a confused expression.
Bubble 1
Vezon: Excuse me, oh brutal, blade-wielding, lover of gardening.
Bubble 2
Vezon: I have never met any Makuta face to mask and wouldn’t know one if he stepped on me and ground me into the dirt.
Panel 13
Vezok's face appearing in a thought bubble of Vezon's.
Vezon: I think maybe you wanted someone else ... I’m Vezon with an 'n,' you see, not Vezok with a 'k,' and --
Panel 14
Carapar already has Vezon's neck in his grasp with motion lines indicating the motion.
Panel 15
Carapar throws Vezon into a wall and says what he says.
Panel 16
Brutaka looks downcast and downwards, saying what he says.
Chapter one concludes with:
To be continued in Federation of Fear - Chapter 2.