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Story Synopsis:


Billions of years ago, two large spiral galaxies collided. As the supermassive black holes collided at the center, a massive blast of ferocious jets of matter was sent out, seeding the area around with elements, but tearing apart the galaxy as well. These waves of gases collided with a solar system nearby containing a rocky, barren world later to be named Spherus Magna. The waves of matter seeded it with the necessary elements to form energized protodermis. Over the years, protodermis formed in the core of the planet and seeped through the surface, turning the barren world into a lush planet full of life.

Fast forward thousands of years, and the course evolution has created three dominant species; the Agori, the Glatorian, and the Skralae. But peace was not meant to be between these three races. The lack of organization, and the lack of leadership lead into constant conflicts and wars.

Eventually, three powerful warriors arose to unite the Glatorian, and Agori, but leaving the Skralae behind. They well understood the power they had was too much as a team of three, so they decided to split the ground into three Kingdoms.

Roxtus (Stone Kingdom), Magnacus (Magma Kingdom), and Galo (Sea Kingdom).

Years later, approximately 467,000 years before the Core War, a mysterious comet lands on the one side of the planet; but to everyone's surprise, it does not damage the planet's surface. Debating on what to do, the three leaders decide to investigate the 'crime' scene themselves.

Their discovery will bring both amazement and doubt. They discover the comet was some short of spacecraft; it seamed to have installed some short of tower in the North mountains. Emerging from the tower are a new race of species; the individuals later to be named the Great Beings. The leaders decide to procide with cautiousness, as they know nothing of the newcomer's intentions. Eventually, the beings manage to explain they are part of a race sent thought the galaxy to discover and grand gifts to other races.

As the leaders all agree the newcomers are harmful, the Great Beings invite the Leaders to join them in a major party, to celebrate the coming and the begging of a New Era. The Generals of the Kingdom's armies (Pior, Noca, and Pravu) are dragged along too, but decide to leave early. Meanwhile, a hermit lurks in the Tower.

The next morning, the generals are training all together, as part of their usual routine. A messenger, nevertheless, delivers a message from a strange man claiming they have proof that the aliens are not to be trusted.

The Hermit meets the generals in the Magnacus central, and presents false information in the form of holograms and voice logs, and goes even further as to use false interpretations to make the Generals think that their Leaders have been brainwashed.

The generals are shocked by the discovery; they immidietely put the kingdooms into lockdown, and decide to take control of the armies, claiming their leaders have gone mad.

When the Leaders return, the Generals hunt them down and put them into jail. The next morning, the leaders are publicly hanged, with the Hermit as the 'personal guest'.

A few days later, the Generals have a hard time running the kingdoms. As they are only capable of running a military force, the Kingdoms are beginning to take the format of a giant army, rather than government. They turn into the Hermit for help.

The Hermit tells them he can't do anything; unless they grant him power. The Generals agree, and sign a contract that makes the Hermit the most powerful man in Spherus Magna, only for seconds later to banish the generals.

After wandering in the desert like animals, the Great Beings gather them in their tower and give the generals food, shelter, and even tech-updates. They realize they had it all wrong. Nevertheless, Pior still thinks it a trick, and stays loyal to the Hermit.

The generals find a way back into their old Kingdoms, hunt and execute the Hermit in front of everyone. As the Kingdoms go back to peace, the newcomers help the Generals lead a better life for everyone

Pior is still not convinced; he eventually declares war to Noca's and Pravu's kingdoms.





Chapter Overview:
(Chapters are written in Noca’s Point of View)

Prologue: Two Matoran find a cavern, and read about how SM was created.

Chapter 1: The three dominant species, Glatori, Agoji, and Skralae; evolve and live in small alliance. Small skirmishes happen between the Stone Tribe attacking the others unfairly. Noca is a young grunt soldier at the time. At this time 3 warriors [Lithon (Stone Kingdom), Raginus (Magma Kingdom), and Arai (Sea Kingdom)], from the 3 tribes realize there is no need for war. They meet a debate on what to do, they then decide on creating three kingdoms and making themselves kings, thus they do.


Chapter 2: Years later, approximately 467,000 years before the Core War, a mysterious comet lands on the one side of the planet; but to everyone's surprise, it does not damage the planet's surface. Debating on what to do, the three leaders decide to investigate the 'crime' scene themselves along with the generals. Their discovery will bring both amazement and doubt. They discover the comet was some short of spacecraft; it seamed to have installed some short of tower in the North mountains. Emerging from the tower are a new race of species; the individuals later to be named the Great Beings.


Chapter 3: The leaders decide to procide with cautiousness, as they know nothing of the newcomer's intentions. Eventually, the beings manage to explain they are part of a race sent thought the galaxy to discover and grand gifts to other races.
As the leaders all agree the newcomers are harmful, the Great Beings invite the Leaders to join them in a major party, to celebrate the coming and the begging of a New Era. The Generals of the Kingdom's armies (Pior, Noca, and Pravu) are dragged along too, but decide to leave early. Meanwhile, a hermit lurks in the Tower.
The next morning, the generals are training all together, as part of their usual routine. A messenger, nevertheless, delivers a message from a strange man claiming they have proof that the aliens are not to be trusted.


Chapter 4: The Hermit meets the generals in the Magnacus central, and presents false information in the form of holograms and voice logs, and goes even further as to use false interpretations to make the Generals think that their Leaders have been brainwashed. The generals are shocked by the discovery; they immidietely put the kingdooms into lockdown, and decide to take control of the armies, claiming their leaders have gone mad. When the Leaders return, the Generals hunt them down and put them into jail. The next morning, the leaders are publicly hanged, with the Hermit as the 'personal guest'.


Chapter 5: A few days later, the Generals have a hard time running the kingdoms. As they are only capable of running a military force, the Kingdoms are beginning to take the format of a giant army, rather than government. They turn into the Hermit for help.
The Hermit tells them he can't do anything; unless they grant him power. The Generals agree, and sign a contract that makes the Hermit the most powerful man in Spherus Magna, only for seconds later to banish the generals.


Chapter 6: After wandering in the desert like animals, the Great Beings gather them in their tower and give the generals food, shelter, and even tech-updates. They realize they had it all wrong. Nevertheless, Pior still thinks it a trick, and stays loyal to the Hermit.
The generals find a way back into their old Kingdoms, hunt and execute the Hermit in front of everyone. As the Kingdoms go back to peace, the newcomers help the Generals lead a better life for everyone
Pior is still not convinced; he eventually declares war to Noca's and Pravu's kingdoms.

Ok, thanks for this. When you're ready, tell me which chapter you want me to wirte. I assume they shouldn't be as long as my TM chapters?

As long as it takes to get the point across at a reasonable pace. Make 'em good. I'll be writing Chap One which is a compilation of what was originally chaps one and two, Celu will be writing two and three, and Kar will be writing four and five soon as he gets back, so you can go ahead and write six. Soon as your done PM me your draft for editing.

Oo, I get the ending.

Be sure to tell me any inter chapter things y'all want to be in it.

Y'know what, don't start writing until I PM you a copy of Chap One, so you can get a sense of what Noca's voice is. We don't want six different Nocas running around at once.

What Glatorian elements make up each tribe again?

Stone-Iron & Rock
Sea-Jungle, Water, and Ice
Magma-Sand & Fire

Isn't sand Vorox?

Not yet.

Vorox evolve after the shattering.

Oh, thanks for that, I mentioned throwing bones to the Vorox at some point in my chap.

My chapter should be ready tonight or next morning, but I'll wait to look at chapter 1 first.

BTW I came upon an idea for the end of ch6. When Pior declares war on the other tribes(this sets up the AB story, right?) he does so knowing that those tribes will split into the seven tribes we know come later(Fire, Sand, Water, Jungle, Ice, Rock, and Iron). That's his intention.

Sounds good, and it's canon, try it.

Yeah, that'll work. I just finished Chap One, sent it to Celu, I'll send GT a copy too and both of you guys the char sheet with the brief profiles of all the chars.