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Origins Storyboard

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1Origins Storyboard Empty Origins Storyboard 21st September 2010, 5:46 pm

Celu

Celu

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Story Synopsis:

*Many billions of years ago, two large spiral galaxies collided. As the supermassive black holes collided at the center, a massive blast wave was sent out as well as ferocious jets of matter from the double-black hole, seeding the area around with elements, but tearing apart the galaxy as well. These waves of gases collided with a solar system nearby containing a rocky, barren world called Sphereus Magna. The waves of matter seeded it with the necessary elements to form protodermis. Over the years, protodermis formed in the core of the planet and seeped through the surface, turning the barren world into a lush planet full of life.

*Glatorian & Agori evolve and make 3 Tribes in 3 Kingdoms.
1) Roxtus (Stone Tribe)
2) Magnacus (Magma Tribe)
3) Galo (Sea Tribe)

*Mysteriously 2 moths after the kingdoms form the GBs Arrive

*The 3 Leaders of the Kingdoms travel to greet the GBs

* While they are gone a Hermit from the South starts disputes between the 3 Kingdoms

* He tricks the inhabitants of the Kingdoms to murder there rulers when they return.

* The GB start to alter the biology of these organic reptiles on the planet

* The disputes turn into skirmishes until one day Roxtus declares war.


Chapter Overview:

Prologue: Matoran find cavern and read about how SM was created.

Chapter 1

The first species on Spherus Magna were simple insects and bacteria. There was a giant insect called Vetus Vicis which then evolved to a huge intelligent bird, Vesta Vic. The Vesta Vic which had 3 different kinds of sub species; Glatori, Skrali, & Agoji. Theses would soon evolve to what would be called Glatorian, Skralae, & Agori. The Glatorian & Agori would live in the desert and under the great ocean on Spherus Magna while the Skralae would migrate to the deepest canyons in the northern mountains. Soon these species would evolve the stone making tools and soon the power of steam.


Chapter 2

The Glatorian lived in 3 unstable tribes for years but they had disputes with each of on what was who's. So representatives from the tribes came together and decided that the planet be broke into 3 kingdoms.

•Stone Kingdom; the Western Black Spikes
•Sea Kingdom; the Great Sea
•Magma Kingdom; the Wastelands & Iron Canyon
• They didn't bother with the Skralae

So they lived in peace for now.... 


Chapter 3
-After an asteroid impact on the horizon, the three tribes' leaders decide to travel there and investigate.
-They discover another species of being also probing the remains. One of the strange beings introduces himself as Angonce, a 'Great Being', and invites the leaders to come to their home. The leaders converse among themselves, at first suspicious of these newcomers. But eventually, they decide to take the risk and go with the Great Beings to their home. Together, the leaders and Great Beings set off.

Chapter 4
-The leaders arrive at the Great Beings' home. Angonce introduces them to two other Great Beings in high standing: Heremus and Invidior. Together they relate the history of the Great Beings. Then the leaders tell the Great Beings of their own history. Angonce suggests that the two civilizations be at peace with one another, and help each other out. The leaders agree. No one notices a mysterious shadow that slinks off into the night after the conversation ends.
-A few Glatorian, the leaders' personal bodyguards, are doing mock combat outside the city walls. It is a moment before two realize that the third, who had been watching, is missing. Soon another disappears with nary a sound, and it isn't long before the third follows them into the shadows.

I finished fleshing out Chapters 5-6:

Chapter 5:

• Hermit arrives in Magnicus and he brings up concerns/lies to the deputy leaders of the kingdoms and they spread to the other kingdoms. The “concerns” are;
o The three kings are going to meet the GBs to get help because they want to start a dictatorship. In the process kill half of the kingdoms citizens.
• 3 deputy leaders meet in counsel with the hermit.
• They discuss what they should do, they for sure believe the hermit because they were suspicious of why they immediately went to find the GBs. They decicde;
o To kill the three kings when they return.


Chapter 6:

• The deputies declare themselves Senators and join the kingdoms into a nation.
• They gather brigades to guard the cities and routes between the cities.
• The kings return and are arrested for treason.

Chapter 7
• The 3 kings are thrown into jail.
• The Senator put them on trial.
• They are sentenced to death by hanging.
• All are present at the hanging and the “guest of honor” is the hermit.

Chapter 8: Hermit's Demise

I. After the execution the Magma Senator, Noca, find a letter from the Magma King to her, it reads;
A. "My dear Noca,
I wish you would have believed the other kings and I, we would never plot against the tribe and you."
B. She brings the letter to the other senators because she believes they made a mistake.
C. The Sea Senator immediately knows that they killed their former kings who were innocent.
1. The Stone senator refuses to believe and sides with the hermit.
II. The hermit is arrested but not without a struggle.
A. He's executed.
III. The Stone senator declares war on the other 2 tribes.

Chapter 9:

•The Senators from the Magma & Sea tribe join forces against the Stone tribe.
•Young agori and glatorian join.
•The Stone tribe allies with the Skrall in the north.
•The war begins.

Factions:

Magma Tribe
Sea Tribe
Stone Tribe
GBs


Main Characters/Names:


Hermit: Armatus

Sea Tribe Leader: Arai

Stone Tribe Leader: Lithon

Magma Tribe Leader: Raginus

Sea Tribe Killer/Army General: Pravu

Stone Tribe Killer/Army General: Pior

Magma Tribe Killer/Army General: Noca



Locations:

Magnacus
Roxtus
Galo
The Valley of the Maze




Last edited by The Clue on 6th November 2010, 4:19 pm; edited 19 times in total

2Origins Storyboard Empty Re: Origins Storyboard 24th September 2010, 8:11 pm

Karmanu

Karmanu

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Looks good to me. Twisted Evil

3Origins Storyboard Empty Re: Origins Storyboard 27th September 2010, 4:40 pm

Celu

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Finished!

4Origins Storyboard Empty Re: Origins Storyboard 28th September 2010, 5:08 pm

Celu

Celu

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It's now completely finished!

5Origins Storyboard Empty Re: Origins Storyboard 28th September 2010, 6:00 pm

Celu

Celu

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I'll send to Rig for him to finalize the we can start to write!

6Origins Storyboard Empty Re: Origins Storyboard 1st October 2010, 7:02 pm

Karmanu

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Count Celu wrote:I'll send to Rig for him to finalize the we can start to write!
All Right! Banana Dance

7Origins Storyboard Empty Re: Origins Storyboard 27th October 2010, 11:44 am

Celu

Celu

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Updated!

Also guys once the chapters are finished be fleshed out and the character descriptions are doen I'll be fixing up this to look more professional and we can start to write.

8Origins Storyboard Empty Re: Origins Storyboard 28th October 2010, 7:34 pm

Celu

Celu

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Updated, a bit, I added Chapter 7 fleshed out!

9Origins Storyboard Empty Re: Origins Storyboard 2nd November 2010, 10:39 am

Celu

Celu

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It's finished but I need to organize it then we can start writing but nit until I organize this.

10Origins Storyboard Empty Re: Origins Storyboard 5th November 2010, 11:56 pm

Celu

Celu

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Storyboard is done, Rig check it so we can begin to write this thing!

11Origins Storyboard Empty Re: Origins Storyboard 6th November 2010, 4:20 pm

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Topic Closing for new one.

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