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Official Price of Jealousy Topic

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1Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Official Price of Jealousy Topic 28th September 2010, 1:48 am

Riglax

Riglax

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Welcome to the second Serial of Era 3: [WOG], Price of Jealousy

What's this?
What the actual goal of this Topic is, to be the main place for the Serial. All the brainstorming, related discussion, suggestions, ideas, concerns, questions, problems, etc. goes HERE.

The Topics around here

The Chapters Topics -- The writer will double check it and post on a new topic in the Forum of the serial, named "Chapter #: (Name)" with description "Writtten from (Writer's name)". There he'll post the chapter, so other can review it, and make adjustments.

The Characters Topic -- is the place, where we will discuss about the Characters personalities and see how they react into different situations. That Topic is meant to evolve depth in the characters and as well help the writers.

The Storyboard Topic -- Here you can view the storyboard as well as the finished Chapters.

Links
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Discuss. Brainstorm, etc. Better Topic soon.



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2Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 28th September 2010, 8:15 am

ToaMagna12



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Riglax Krom wrote:A 5 Chapter story, explains, how Invidior who had found the solution, later tries to steal the Ignika, and touches it and he is placed to the tower which later becomes the Mad GB. Also he makes MU modifications.

Discuss. Brainstorm, etc. Better Topic soon.
Solution to what?

3Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 28th September 2010, 9:42 am

Riglax

Riglax

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Invented the gravity stabilizers so they can walk in the robot. That's what he did, and he got no credit which
made him jealous etc.

4Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 28th September 2010, 5:46 pm

ToaMagna12



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Riglax Krom wrote:Invented the gravity stabilizers so they can walk in the robot. That's what he did, and he got no credit which
made him jealous etc.
Ooooh ok.
btw, shouldnt we finish GC before we start this?

5Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 28th September 2010, 10:16 pm

Skarloth

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Yeah, I think we should. Tongue

Wouldn't it be awesome if we made those "modifications" of his the reason the AI in the Matoran and Toa glitched to Male and Female?

Kazi out.

6Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 29th September 2010, 1:48 am

Riglax

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That's the idea Tongue

Look.

TGC is 30 or so chapters, if this is five, we can pull it off in like.. 10 days. Tongue But let's do TGC first.

Also any ideas for other characters that can appear?
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7Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 29th September 2010, 9:21 am

Celu

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30 chapter?!? Dude I wanted each serial no more then 7. Tongue

8Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 7th October 2010, 2:56 pm

Riglax

Riglax

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MNI CEO

BRAINSTORM. Start brainstorming. For this, we need to get it done.

9Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 7th October 2010, 6:36 pm

ToaMagna12



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Well how long after TGC is this seriel taking place

10Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 7th October 2010, 7:46 pm

Skarloth

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I have an idea for other characters that could show up;

Vastus? Greg never said how old he was, and he was obviously in the Core war, so he must have been at least a teenager around then, or older/younger.

We could make a Skrall show up. Tongue

And possibly another GB, they can try to make Invidior feel better about getting no credit.

Kazi out.

11Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 7th October 2010, 10:06 pm

ToaMagna12



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Toa Mizore Kazi wrote:I have an idea for other characters that could show up;

Vastus? Greg never said how old he was, and he was obviously in the Core war, so he must have been at least a teenager around then, or older/younger.

We could make a Skrall show up. Tongue

And possibly another GB, they can try to make Invidior feel better about getting no credit.

Kazi out.
Yeah that sounds good

12Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 8th October 2010, 2:25 pm

Riglax

Riglax

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MNI CEO

Yeah, I think we should. But, maybe, we could have someone -- or even Invidior's imagination playing with him. Any other ideas on what should he change?

13Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 8th October 2010, 7:17 pm

Skarloth

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Well, he could design/change how the robot moves, or possibly find a way to make it bigger?

Kazi out.

14Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 9th October 2010, 4:18 am

Riglax

Riglax

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That's kinda stretched, but this ideas gave me one better. What if he actually changes the plans so the robot cannot move in space? So, they shall require to built the Red Star? And that's why there's no way to contact it from the MU?

15Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 9th October 2010, 9:16 pm

ToaMagna12



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Riglax Krom wrote:That's kinda stretched, but this ideas gave me one better. What if he actually changes the plans so the robot cannot move in space? So, they shall require to built the Red Star? And that's why there's no way to contact it from the MU?
Yes, Perfect. Also, he can glich the Toa genders.

-ToaMagna12

16Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 10th October 2010, 1:01 pm

Riglax

Riglax

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MNI CEO

Yup, he can. Ok, then PoJ is on Twisted Evil

17Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 10th October 2010, 8:25 pm

Skarloth

Skarloth

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Now hang on, that's going to far, now it looks like he's responsible for everything.

We should only make him responsible for about two things. Little things.

Kazi out.

18Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 11th October 2010, 10:42 am

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

Ok, we'll cot them down. He shall just change some of the plans, and the workers will built it wrong, resulting in that.

Plus, the Makuta were created from Mata Nui, so he can only harm the plans once, achieving this two goals.

19Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 11th October 2010, 10:51 pm

ToaMagna12



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Ok so how r we going to cot them down?

20Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 12th October 2010, 10:03 pm

Skarloth

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I think we already did. Tongue

Okay, so what kind of plans? Movement? AI function? Eye color? Tongue

Kazi out.

21Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 12th October 2010, 10:21 pm

ToaMagna12



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Eye color? how bout gender glich

22Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 27th October 2010, 11:20 am

Riglax

Riglax

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MNI CEO

He'd just tickle the AI of the Makuta and the make the legs less powerful -- by they time they figure it out, it would be too late.

Also, he will have thoughts about how they all died and he survived. Sound good?

I think that covers 5 chapters, so what do you think?

EDIT: And updated Smile

23Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 27th October 2010, 10:25 pm

ToaMagna12



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Its good but in all seriousness I think we should add the gender glich in for modications and leave it at that.

24Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 5th November 2010, 12:23 pm

Riglax

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MNI CEO

Wait, why gender glitch? Huh

25Official Price of Jealousy Topic Empty Re: Official Price of Jealousy Topic 7th November 2010, 12:06 am

ToaMagna12



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because, that would explain why certain elements are reserved to only one gender

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