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Official Origins Topic

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1Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Official Origins Topic 29th August 2010, 1:19 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

First topic message reminder :

Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Originsofficial

Origins is part of the Arc, (the other one being Altum Bellum), that explains how the world of Spherus Magna came to be.


Synopsis:
Origins starts with a group of Matoran finding the Great Being's Lab, and they start to read the inscriptions on the walls and learn about Spherus Magna's past.

Many billions of years ago, two large spiral galaxies collided. As the supermassive black holes collided at the center, a massive blast wave was sent out as well as ferocious jets of matter from the double-black hole, seeding the area around with elements, but tearing apart the galaxy as well. These waves of gases collided with a solar system nearby containing a rocky, barren world called Sphereus Magna. The waves of matter seeded it with the necessary elements to form protodermis.

Over the years, protodermis formed in the core of the planet and seeped through the surface, turning the barren world into a lush planet full of life. As the Glatorian and Agori evolve they form into 3 Tribes/ 3 Kingdoms, Stone Tribe (Roxtus), Magma Tribe (Magnacus), & Sea Tribe (Galo), two months after these Tribes form a Meteorite crashes in the north and the GBs start to mysteriously arrive. The three rulers of the kingdoms travel to greet and welcome the GBs.

While the leaders are travelling up north a jealous mysterious hermit starts lies between the tribes as the kingdoms start to dispute. These lies drive the tribes into killing their leaders when the return. As this is all happening the GBs start to test and alter the biology of reptiles in Spherus Magna’s Great Jungle. Disputes turn into skirmishes, skirmishes turn into battle as the Kingdom of Roxtus declares war.

Altum Bellum will continue the war, and how the kingdoms break into the other tribes and the Skrall evolve from them.



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26Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 29th September 2010, 10:48 am

Karmanu

Karmanu

MNI Author

MNI Author

Awesome I'll start assigning parts so we can start writing.

27Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 29th September 2010, 11:22 am

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

No no!

We need to flesh out the events so I need help I can't do it alone.

28Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 29th September 2010, 11:50 am

Legolover-361

Legolover-361

MNI COO

MNI COO

...So what events do we flesh out? We need to decide on what events will happen, and decide what exactly will occur during those events.

29Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 29th September 2010, 12:22 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Well this is how I'll go:

Chapter 1: The evolution of the glatorian & agori.

Chapter 2: The formation of the 3 kingdoms.

Chapter 3-4: Journey to the GBs of the 3 tribe kings.

Chapter 5-6: The hermit arrives and he begins they rumors in order to tale over.

Chapter 7: The 3 kings return as the powerful warriors are planning to kill them and they do.

Chapter 8-9: the demise of the hermit.

Chapter 10: the power warrior from the stone tribe goes corrupt and a war begins.

30Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 29th September 2010, 12:50 pm

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

Also, be sure to read the dawn AC Topic. It says that you'll all write with a turn that's already defined.

31Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 29th September 2010, 1:09 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Wait I need to set a new rule all chapters must be outlined by the author then the outline needs to be checked. Wink

32Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 29th September 2010, 1:40 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Also guys the fleshed out events don't have to have all the details just the important ones the authors can fill in what exactly happens like the details inside the important details.

33Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 29th September 2010, 2:13 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Fleshed out Chapter 1's important details:

Chapter 1: Evolution of the Glatorian and Agori

The first species on Spherus Magna were simple insects and bacteria. There was a giant insect called Vetus Vicis which then evolved to a huge intelligent bird, Vesta Vic. The Vesta Vic which had 3 different kinds of sub species; Glatori, Skrali, & Agoji. Theses would soon evolve to what would be called Glatorian, Skralae, & Agori. The Glatorian & Agori would live in the desert and under the great ocean on Spherus Magna while the Skralae would migrate to the deepest canyons in the northern mountains. Soon these species would evolve the stone making tools and soon the power of steam.

34Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 1st October 2010, 12:14 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Guys we need people to help over here!! Cool

35Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 2nd October 2010, 1:46 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Fleshed out Chapter 2:

Chapter 2: Formation of the Kingdoms

The Glatorian lived in 3 unstable tribes for years but they had disputes with each of on what was who's. So representatives from the tribes came together and decided that the planet be broke into 3 kingdoms.

•Stone Kingdom; the Western Black Spikes
•Sea Kingdom; the Great Sea
•Magma Kingdom; the Wastelands & Iron Canyon
• They didn't bother with the Skralae

So they lived in peace for now.... 

But guys I need your help!

36Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 4th October 2010, 3:55 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Guys!!!!???!!!!!! I can't do this alone!!

37Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 4th October 2010, 3:57 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

These events still need to be fleshed out:

Chapter 3-4: Journey to the GBs of the 3 tribe kings.

Chapter 5-6: The hermit arrives and he begins they rumors in order to tale over.

Chapter 7: The 3 kings return as the powerful warriors are planning to kill them and they do.

Chapter 8-9: the demise of the hermit.

Chapter 10: the power warrior from the stone tribe goes corrupt and a war begins.

38Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 4th October 2010, 10:39 pm

Skarloth

Skarloth

MNI Board Member
MNI Board Member

Okay, I'll help, just tell me what to write about, and I'll do it. Smile

Kazi at your service and out.

39Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 4th October 2010, 10:44 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Journey of the 3 kings to find the GBs!

Brainstorm!

40Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 4th October 2010, 10:58 pm

Skarloth

Skarloth

MNI Board Member
MNI Board Member

Um. Maybe they could form a truce between each other, but they don't know about back home yet.

Kazi out.

41Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 4th October 2010, 11:20 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Like maybe a truce to kill the GBs if they are too powerful!

42Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 5th October 2010, 3:56 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Guys where here and need your help!

43Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 7th October 2010, 5:39 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Chapter 5-6: The hermit arrives and he begins they rumors in order to tale over.

Start brainstorming this!

44Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 8th October 2010, 12:55 am

Skarloth

Skarloth

MNI Board Member
MNI Board Member

Celu, no one is here. Sad

You're talking to no one. Sad

I'd help, but I don't know where to start.

Kazi out.

45Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 8th October 2010, 4:41 pm

Legolover-361

Legolover-361

MNI COO

MNI COO

PEEK-A-BOO!!

I might as well help out. Tongue Keep in mind that I drummed these ideas up practically on the spur of the moment, so don't be all shocked if they aren't completely thought through.

Chapter 3
-After an asteroid impact on the horizon, the three tribes' leaders decide to travel there and investigate.
-They discover another species of being also probing the remains. One of the strange beings introduces himself as Angonce, a 'Great Being', and invites the leaders to come to their home. The leaders converse among themselves, at first suspicious of these newcomers. But eventually, they decide to take the risk and go with the Great Beings to their home. Together, the leaders and Great Beings set off.

Chapter 4
-The leaders arrive at the Great Beings' home. Angonce introduces them to two other Great Beings in high standing: Heremus and Invidior. Together they relate the history of the Great Beings. Then the leaders tell the Great Beings of their own history. Angonce suggests that the two civilizations be at peace with one another, and help each other out. The leaders agree. No one notices a mysterious shadow that slinks off into the night after the conversation ends.
-A few Glatorian, the leaders' personal bodyguards, are doing mock combat outside the city walls. It is a moment before two realize that the third, who had been watching, is missing. Soon another disappears with nary a sound, and it isn't long before the third follows them into the shadows.

Thoughts?

46Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 8th October 2010, 6:14 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

But I see some stuff I'd like to add.

47Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 8th October 2010, 6:16 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Wai tI didn't Facepalm

48Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 16th October 2010, 9:45 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

I finished fleshing out Chapters 5-6:

Chapter 5:

• Hermit arrives in Magnicus and he brings up concerns/lies to the deputy leaders of the kingdoms and they spread to the other kingdoms. The “concerns” are;
o The three kings are going to meet the GBs to get help because they want to start a dictatorship. In the process kill half of the kingdoms citizens.
• 3 deputy leaders meet in counsel with the hermit.
• They discuss what they should do, they for sure believe the hermit because they were suspicious of why they immediately went to find the GBs. They decicde;
o To kill the three kings when they return.


Chapter 6:

• The deputies declare themselves Senators and join the kingdoms into a nation.
• They gather brigades to guard the cities and routes between the cities.
• The kings return and are arrested for treason.

49Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 22nd October 2010, 6:38 pm

Rising Moon

Rising Moon

Worldscape Executive

Worldscape Executive

Alright, I've got a basic idea for the prologue (which I was assigned). Should I give the details?

Also, what specifically do you guys need help with here?

50Official Origins Topic - Page 2 Empty Re: Official Origins Topic 23rd October 2010, 4:29 am

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

Samples.

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