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Ancient Chronicle: Samples

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1Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 5:17 pm

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

CLOSED 1/1/11.


Ancient Chronicle: Samples Aclogo10


There is no reason for much talking. We got to move on and keep this alive. Until we start writing (which will be when people join the need-able places as well as finish brainstorming. Please, read everything, it's not that big.

Because we need advertising and keeping the people awake, samples is the solution.

What are those samples?
Samples are little pieces from the work we are doing for Ancient Chronicle. A sample of Story, Art, Podcast, MOC or anything, can be used for advertisement or just showing off the potentials of the project, while entertaining the workers and keeping them here and happy.

What will they contain?
We shall do samples for everything - MOCs, Art, Voice acting, etc. Speaking the truth, those will not be as long; neither will they be included inside the actual AC stuff, they are samples made only for advertisement and to keep the workers working. Although, I will stretch this -- The quality must be as good as with the Real ones. If samples are worst than our work then nobody will ever read our real work.

To be finished Samples:

You can claim your are doing one here at the topic. You can also ask for your own sample, with permission from the Director of the Deaprtment your are doing. You can as well ask your leader if you want to do anything extra, or say it right here.[/b]

Samples List:

Writing:
BEFORE STARTING A WRIITNG SMAMPLE, MAKE SURE YOU HAVE READ THE SERIAL'S STORYBOARD

Origins
Scenario 1: Hermit's Origins
Scenario 2: GBs journey to SM

Altus Bellum
Scenario 1: The surrender of the stone tribe
Scenario 2: Formation of the 7 tribes


The Grand Creation
Scenario 1: Varonis and Galintin meet in the Iron Tribe mines.

Price of Jealousy
Scenario 1: Invidior tries to outran his doom.

Their Mistake Podcast
Aderia has currently pmed all the TM actors, so get cracking!


MOCing:
Sister of the Skrall
Iron Tribe Agori

Lein, a Jungle Agori


Art:
NEW CONTEST COMING SOON!


3D Art:
If you'd like to make anything do it. As long as it's AC.

Promoting them & AC:

Now that we are done with making some, those who have made their samples and they are approved by me, can be posted on Bzp. Start posting them on Bzp, but with some rules, You must include this code:

Code:
[center][size=5][color="#006400"]Mata Nui Inc.[/color] | [color="#8B0000"]Plast! Produc.[/color][/size]

[b][size=18][url="http://www.bzpower.com/forum/index.php?automodule=blog&blogid=1601&showentry=95296"][color="#006400"]Mata Nui Inc.[/color][/url].
[/size][/b]
[url="http://www.bzpower.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=329160"][color="#000080"]Ancient Chronicle - Discover BIONICLE's Past[/color][/url]
[url="http://www.bzpower.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=328223"][color="#00BFFF"]KanohiJournal Outreach - Taking the tale everywhere[/color][/url]
The New Era, A BNG/MNI Comic Collaboration - Starting End of 2010
Awakenings - The Mata early years.
Solis Magna Series: The Atlas - Starting 2011


[b][size=18][color="#8B0000"]Plast! Productions[/color][/size][/b]
[url="http://kanohijournal.madebyplast.com/"]KanohiJournal[/url] - Bionicle eMagazine.
[url="http://novus.madebyplast.com"]KANOHI.novus[/url] - The ultimate BIONICLE fan project
[url="http://chron.madebyplast.com/"]Chronicles[/url] - electronic. information. media[/center]

.. at the Bottom of the Topic And you must have a description, showing AC:
This is a sample of Mata Nui Inc's project Ancient Chronicle.

Of course you can say it with other words, and comment on the sample yourself.

List of Aprroved:

Stories:
By Legolover-361: Lein's Tale Samples - Bzpower - BIO: Next Gen
By Kazi: Osavu's and Invidior's Meeting Sample - Bzpower - BIO: Next Gen
By Celu: Origins Sample - Bzpower - BIO: Next Gen

MOCs:
By Christo: Pre-Evolution Zesk MOC Sample - Bzpower - BIO: Next Gen
By Junkmaster: Pre-Evolution Vorox - Bzpower - BIO: Next Gen

BioRecords/Music:
By Legolover-361: Their Mistake Theme - Bzpower - BIO: Next Gen

IMPORTANT NOTES:
Quality must be perfect, like the real work.
BEFORE STARTING A WRIITNG SMAMPLE, MAKE SURE YOU HAVE READ THE SERIAL'S STORYBOARD
You can as well ask your director if you want to do anything extra, but start after getting approval. or say it right here, although you must be a Worker in AC.
CAREFUL: ONE WORKER CAN ONLY DO ONE SAMPLE AT A TIME.



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2Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 5:20 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Sorry Dude you didn't make it clear what to post. Wink

3Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 5:24 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

My Origins Sample:

Spoiler:

4Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 5:52 pm

Skarloth

Skarloth

MNI Board Member
MNI Board Member

Rig, Celu, we're allowed to say what we like and don't like about other people's samples, right?

Kazi out.

5Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 6:03 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Of course as long as it's just CC.

6Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 6:41 pm

Skarloth

Skarloth

MNI Board Member
MNI Board Member

Okay, well, I liked your sample, but it seemed rushed, and you kept on calling Vhisola Macku, or Macku was there, but you didn't make that clear. And sometimes it was hard to understand what you were saying.

Kazi out.

7Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 6:48 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Ah okay well I'll fix that

8Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 6:57 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

How's it now?


“Ehrye?!”

“Yes, Vhisola?” replied Kopeke, Vhisola replied, “You okay? That earthquake was horrible.”

“I’m fine; where are the others?” asked Ehrye.

“I don’t know they’re gone”, said Vhisola, “So what do we do now?”

Ehrye was silent for about five minutes, then he replied back, “well first we find out where that hole came from” Ehrye pointed somewhere across the skyline of Metru Nui.

Vhisola turned around and saw a gaping hole in the sky!

****

A little bit later the two where back together; there were few minor injuries but other than that they were all fine. Ehrye asked, “So, how do we get to that “hole in the universe?”

“Quiet,” whispered Vhisola, “I hear someone or something.”

The two stood there for about thirty seconds, then Vhisola screamed, and “Run!”

Ehrye ran he was a bit faster than Vhisola; as he was looking back telling Vhisola to hurry. The two stopped running, Vhisola said, “we’ve lost them.”

Vhisola suggested, “I guess we can walk hopefully we’ll find a way out” Ehyre replied, “I guess we can,” so off went Ehrye and Vhisola walking to that “hole.”

****

The two had been searching for hours to find a way out; then after 5 hours Vhisola screamed to Ehrye, “I found a hatch!”

Ehrye ran to where Vhisola was trying to open the hatch; he got behind her and pulls with her. The door slammed open the two falling back; the two stood back up they were both hoping they would find a friend out the hatch. Soon both of them had stepped out; both Ehrye and Vhisola ran up to a Toa they knew as Tahu. “Toa Tahu, what’s going on,” asked Vhisola, Tahu replied, “we won, we beat Teridax and he’s dead.”

“Thanks goodness,” said Ehyre, “so where are, Tahu?”

“Where on a place called Spherus Magna,” answered Tahu. Later Vhisola and Ehrye were sitting around a fire which Tahu had created; Ehyre asked, “So Vhisola what do want to do tomorrow?”

“I don’t know, there’s so much to explore now,” replied Vhisola.

****

The next morning came around; Vhisola and Ehyre decided to explore a cavern that they heard about from a blue toa-looking warrior. “So where again did this warrior say this cavern was,” asked Ehrye.

“She said it was somewhere up ahead,” replied Vhisola; the two walked on for about another 10 minutes.

Then, they reach a hole in a mountain side; the two decided to walk in. When they reached the back they saw a ruin of a large door. “How do we get in,” asked Ehrye, Vhisola replied, “we climb.”

The two climbed over the ruin; when they reached the top they saw a row of entrance to different terrains, volcanic, forest, ocean, and more; “Well lets go,” said Ehrye.

The two had been looking around for about 3 hours not finding anything interesting; then, “Vhisola come here I think I found something,” yelled Ehrye.

Vhisola immediately ran to Ehrye; inscribed on the wall was a story reading;

“Many billions of years ago, two large spiral galaxies collided. As the super massive black holes collided at the center, a massive blast wave was sent out as well as ferocious jets of matter from the double-black hole, seeding the area around with elements, but tearing apart the galaxy as well. These waves of gases collided with a solar system nearby containing a rocky, barren world called Spherus Magna. The waves of matter seeded it with the necessary elements to form protodermis. Over the years, protodermis formed in the core of the planet and seeped through the surface, turning the barren world into a lush planet full of life.”

Vhisola and Ehrye stared at each other both wondering what they had stumbled upon.

To be continued…

9Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 7:18 pm

Skarloth

Skarloth

MNI Board Member
MNI Board Member

Um, do you think It'd be okay if I rewrite it for you?

Um, when did they separate? And how did they get hurt? It's better now that you got rid of Macku, but there are still some parts that are a bit out of place.

Kazi out.

10Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 7:20 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Just edit it, please. Wink



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11Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 7:21 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

I mean edit it!

12Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 7:39 pm

Skarloth

Skarloth

MNI Board Member
MNI Board Member

Okay. Smile

“Ehrye?!”

“Yes, Vhisola?” replied Kopeke, Vhisola looked at the Ko-Matoran, “You okay? That earthquake was horrible.”

“I’m fine; where are the others?” asked Ehrye.

“I don’t know where they’ve gone”, said Vhisola, “So what do we do now?”

Ehrye was silent for about five minutes, then replied back, “well first we find out where that hole came from,” Ehrye pointed somewhere across the skyline of Metru Nui.

Vhisola turned around and saw a gaping hole in the sky.

****

A little bit later the two where back together; there were few minor injuries but other than that they were all fine. Ehrye asked, “So, how do we get to that “hole in the universe?”

“Quiet,” whispered Vhisola, “I hear someone, or something.”

The two stood there for about thirty seconds, then Vhisola screamed, “Run!”

Ehrye ran, he was a bit faster than Vhisola; as he was looking back telling Vhisola to hurry. The two stopped running, and Vhisola said, “we’ve lost them.”

“I guess we can walk, hopefully we’ll find a way out.” Vhisola suggested, Ehrye looked at her, “I guess we can,” the Matoran of ice said, so off went they went, walking to that “hole.”

****

The two had been searching for hours to find a way out; then after 5 hours Vhisola screamed to Ehrye, “I found a hatch!”

Ehrye ran to where Vhisola was trying to open the hatch; he got behind her and pulled with her. The door swung open, them falling back; the two stood back up, they were both hoping they would find a friend outside the hatch. Soon both of them had stepped out; they spotted a tall being not far away, and both Ehrye and Vhisola ran up to a Toa they knew as Tahu. “Toa Tahu, what’s going on?” asked Vhisola, Tahu replied, “we won, we beat Teridax and he’s dead.”

“Thanks goodness,” said Ehyre, “so where are, Tahu?”

“Where on a place called Spherus Magna,” answered Tahu. Later Vhisola and Ehrye were sitting around a fire which Tahu had created; Ehyre asked, “So Vhisola what do you want to do tomorrow?”

“I don’t know, there’s so much to explore now,” replied Vhisola.

****

The next morning came around; Vhisola and Ehyre decided to explore a cavern that they heard about from a blue toa-looking warrior. “So where again did this warrior say this cavern was,” asked Ehrye.

“She said it was somewhere up ahead,” replied Vhisola; the two walked on for about another 10 minutes.

Then, they reach a hole in a mountain side; the two decided to walk in. When they reached the back they saw a ruin of a large door. “How do we get in?” Asked Ehrye, Vhisola replied to him, “we climb.”

The two climbed over the ruin; when they reached the top they saw a row of entrance to different terrains, volcanic, forest, ocean, and more; “Well lets go,” said Ehrye.

The two had been looking around for about 3 hours not finding anything interesting; then, “Vhisola come here I think I found something!” Yelled Ehrye.

Vhisola immediately ran to Ehrye; inscribed on the wall was a story reading;

“Many billions of years ago, two large spiral galaxies collided. As the super massive black holes collided at the center, a massive blast wave was sent out as well as ferocious jets of matter from the double-black hole, seeding the area around with elements, but tearing apart the galaxy as well. These waves of gases collided with a solar system nearby containing a rocky, barren world called Spherus Magna. The waves of matter seeded it with the necessary elements to form protodermis. Over the years, protodermis formed in the core of the planet and seeped through the surface, turning the barren world into a lush planet full of life.”

Vhisola and Ehrye stared at each other, both wondering what they had stumbled upon.

To be continued…

Okay, I did the best I could without changing to much. I think that they should be wandering around for like 30 minutes, 3 hours plus walking around a gigantic mysterious cave without finding anything interesting is a bit strange. Tongue

Kazi out.

13Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 7:45 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Nice, okay thanks I'll help you with your sample. Wink

14Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 5th October 2010, 8:06 pm

Skarloth

Skarloth

MNI Board Member
MNI Board Member

Okay, well, I want to write a sample about Osavus and Invidor talk.

Kazi out.

15Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 7th October 2010, 6:43 am

christo1096

christo1096

AC MOCist

AC MOCist

any articles for pre evolution vorox and zesk? and lein too

16Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 7th October 2010, 3:08 pm

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

Kazi -- Permission granted. Post it on the TGC Forum and post saying here you posted it Tongue

chirsto (Welcome aboard!) Nope, I think you can go imaginative. Just make sure you make only one at a time. Permission Granted.

17Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 7th October 2010, 5:04 pm

Aderia

Aderia

Retired

Retired

Hey, how are we gonna be doing the 'Their Mistake' Sample? Don't we need MrSciFiGuy and the cast?

18Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 7th October 2010, 5:08 pm

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

Well, you tell me. You pm them, you organize it! Tongue

Yes, we'll need them, PM them saying so.

19Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 7th October 2010, 7:50 pm

Skarloth

Skarloth

MNI Board Member
MNI Board Member

K, thanks Rig, I'll do it in Word, then put it up. Smile

Kazi out. Oh, um, I went on a writing spree last night, anyone wanna see it? I'll PM it to someone.

20Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 7th October 2010, 10:52 pm

The Dark Hunter

The Dark Hunter

MNI Board Vice Chairman


MNI Board Vice Chairman

The advertisements I made and am working on can be counted as art

21Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 7th October 2010, 11:57 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

Yes Wink

22Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 8th October 2010, 12:57 am

Skarloth

Skarloth

MNI Board Member
MNI Board Member

Alright, I posted the sample. Smile

Go check it out people!

Kazi out.

23Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 8th October 2010, 1:06 pm

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

Dark Hunter wrote:The advertisements I made and am working on can be counted as art

Count Celu wrote:Yes Wink

No and No. This is not MNI samples. It's AC Work only.

24Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 8th October 2010, 1:09 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

I thought he meant ads for AC. Shrugs

25Ancient Chronicle: Samples Empty Re: Ancient Chronicle: Samples 8th October 2010, 1:41 pm

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

No, they are ads for MNI Shrugs

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