TGC -- Characters Topic

About the Grand Creation

The Grand Creaion is the third serial to be produced for Ancient Chronicle, the currently leading project of the fan-based organization Mata Nui Incorporated. In-story, the Great Beings' leader, the Elder has been pushing the creation of a testing robot for over a decade, and abusing the Great Beings after his rise to power several centuries ago.

Two Great Beings will decide to put an end to this experiment, as well as this Elder - but they soon find out it's harder than they though. The Elder then assigns several Agori and Glatorian to uncover the truth. Slowly, they find themselves digging even deeper than they thought, as they unravel a conspiracy that has been running for eons.



Ackar
Gender: Male
Tribe: Fire
Description: Ackar grew up lonely, and never settled goals for his life. He spend most of his life wondering around in caravans, doing small jobs there and there. Eventually, Raanu hired him as guard in the Great Being's Tower. His life will be turned around when he becomes the leader of the alpha security team. He's forced to take responsibility, something he's not quite capable off.

Galintin (Meaning: Capable)
Gender: Male
Tribe: Iron
Description: Galintin has spent all his life achieving his goals. He's never been stopped, or hindered from moving forward. Most of the time, he does not like being held up, and sometimes when he thinks things are moving too slow, he will step in, even when he was not asked to or expected to, complete the job, whatever it might be. He has taken on jobs most Glatorian would tremble and run away from, and has actually made himself quite well known for being a partial dare-devil, enthusiast, and a good friend.

Rohkea (Meaning: Brave)
Gender: Female
Tribe: Ice
Description: Even though Rohkea was an Ice tribe member, she was unlike the others. While the Ice tribe was known for its ruthlessness, Rohkea was the opposite of what most of her fellow villagers stood for. She was kind, forgiving and sweet, which eventually compelled her to leave the Ice Tribe. She became a trader by traveling all over Spherus Magna, trying to live her life to the best of her ability.

Casiria (Meaning: Sand)
Gender: Female
Description: Casiria used to be a Sand Stalker trainer for the Sand Tribe. The job gave her the courage to force on others her beliefs, including the idea that morals are relative, "right" and "wrong" are just constructs of the mind, and that "the greater good" overcomes almost any risk of damage or harm. She gives her honest opinion to everything -- even if it's too honest -- and that sometimes puts her in an antisocial light. She likes being in charge of something, whether directly or indirectly. Even though her ideas are often considered radical, whenever someone puts them down she gets angry. Her ultimate goal is to become a respected visionary and be entrusted with a high leadership position. Unfortunately, in her quest to serve the "greater good" she will volunteer to become one of the many of the Elder's 'sleeper agents'. After quite sometime, she realizes she has become a slave, and despises her actions and self for that.


Raanu
Gender: Male
Description: At this point of his life, Raanu is an enthusiast guard of the Fire Tribe. He has passion for meeting new people, and discovering all shorts of mysteries and ideas about Spherus Magna. He's also very passionate about the Great Beings, and hopes to be hired by them.

Varonis(Meaning: Hero)
Gender: Male
Tribe: Fire
Description: Varonis is the mastermind of the game. He enjoys running the business and playing with people, as he likes watching them going through various of situations. Varonis' trick lies in his ability to completely cover up his true identity, and get the medium attention all Agori do. Once part of the Sleeper Agents' Inner Circle lead by the Elder, Varonis was the last man standing when all the leaders were murdered by a rebellion formed from the inside. While the rebellion was eventually terminated, he decided it would be best if he and the Elder would split their people. Unfortunately for Varonis, the agents were de-hypnotized, and his business evolved into a 'henchmen' agency. Himself though was hired as the first Great Being's assistant.

Pomerax (Meaning: Calm)
Gender: Male
Tribe: Water
Description: Pomerax was named accurately. His name, though in a slightly distorted form, means "calm" in Agori. He hails from the Water tribe, but doesn't feel much sympathy to them at all. He doesn't feel much sympathy to anything. Or antipathy. He prefers empathy over both of them. He feels enlightened, awoken when he simply watches the world go by, and immerses himself in the people and the concepts that pass by him. Thus, over his life, he has collected so much details in his head, realized so many truths about the world and its people, that now it is said, though slightly in exaggeration, that he can tell everything about a man just by looking at him. The truth is, he can understand a man by looking at him and in his eyes. It is thus virtually impossible to lie to him, because he recognizes emotions and even hints of what one's thinking almost immediately from their behavior.



Protasious (The Elder)
Gender: Male
Description: The fearless leader of the Great Beings, Protasious has been an Elder since the formation of the seven tribes. Eventually, the power to control the whole of Spherus Magna has lead him into madness. He's power mad, ruthless, and doesn't give a second chance. Over time, feeling that his control over the people of Spherus Magna wasn't enough, he 'chose' a selection of Glatorian to become his own personal sleeper agents, serving the "greater good". When all of his Inner Circle was murdered, the last remaining of the leaders, Varonis, decided they would both take half of the agents. The Elder nevertheless, de-hypnotized Varonis' agents, turning them into paid 'henchmen'. In return, he hired Varonis as the first GBs' assistant. 7 years later, the day Invidior proposed the idea for the robot, the Elder, claiming this project is too important to be lead by him, threw Invidior away from the project. He's eager to have this finished on time.

Invidior (Meaning: Jealous) (Mad GB)
Gender: Male
Description: Invidior is the true designer and mastermind behind the idea of the robot. He was forced to quit the place of the runner of the project, when the Elder decided it was too big for him to handle. Later, he'd be brought back to invent the gravity stabilizers, only to be again fired. Claiming that if he can't have the robot, none must, he sworn to destroy the Great Beings and the robot.

Osavus (Meaning: Cunning)
Gender: Male
Description: Osavus has seen better days in his life. Once the most respected of the Great Beings, he was demoted when an vital experiment went wrong, due to him not paying attention. Since that time, he's been trying to gain the trust of the Elder, who's been playing tricks with him. Eventually, he will join Invidior into destroying the robot, once he realizes what's really going on with the Elder.

Raeir (Their Mistake Elder)
Gender: Male
Description: Raeir is a man of thoughts. He's not the one to please, get angry or fight, but rather resorts into the ways of the mind to resolve his problems, and carefully plans his actions, one by one. After Protasious' death, Raeir will become the one to take his place.

Morkoth (Their Mistake Main Character)
Gender: Male
Description: Reckless and brash, Morkoth is very cunning. (See Their Mistake for more info)

Angonce
Gender: Male
Description: Not available, canon character.

Heremus
Gender: Male
Description: Not available, canon character.



Silex (Meaning: Rock)
Gender: Male
Description: One might think of Silex as what his name implies. A rock, a great hulking warrior who's as dense as a boulder. However, nothing could be further from the truth. Silex is an extremely thin and tall warrior, with strange hooked blades growing out of the backs of his hands. He is a sly, although deadly warrior, who prefers to stealth attack, killing his pray before it can react. He is a greatly feared assassin, and fights more for the thrill then the pay. He joined the Henchmen for the purpose of having constantly work on his hands.

Robur (Meaning: Strength)
Gender: Male
Description: Robur is exactly what his name implies; the muscle of the group. If anyone wants to beat some one strait up, Robur is the best pick. As the most powerful and most stupidly fearless Henchman, Robur is easily controlled.

Avarus (Meaning: Greedy)
Gender: Male
Tribe: Jungle
Description: Avarus is the pet of Varonis. He always tries to please him, but never manages to get off Varonis a good word. As long as he's been running the economics of the whole henchman business, he has been stealing most of the pay rewards for himself. Himself is an angry man, who believes life must treat one better, and always seeks how to rob and steal someone's happiness.

Ferveon (Meaning: Rage)
Gender: Female
Description: Ferveon became a henchmen when she was left broke. She's very moody and quick to anger. She has an uncommonly strong love of money, coupled with a weak sense of money management. She never stops asking employers when she's going to be paid and when her mission will be over. Between assignments she wastes all her cash on drinks, trying to forget she's a failure in everything except fighting. She isn't good with words and speaks in succinct, sometimes incomplete sentences.

Alright guys, this topic is completed. The next topic will be completed in the next hour. What did I change? First, I reworded a lot of these descriptions, but kept the basic ideas. I added some backstory that we can use as a second layer of the story, were through discussions, flashbacks and whatnot, those characters' backstories will be told.

And even if they wont, it's okay.

Awesome. I'm doing progress on the storyboard, but it's too late to go on. Oh well, the plot is in my mind. I just need to write it down.

You can do the Prologue, though.

Alright guys, I'm almost done with the edits over here. Though, I do consider LL's suggestion (making a Henchman female) is a good idea.

I would suggest Ferveon, since he's the least developed character.

Also, props to Dov and LL for Pomerax's and Casiria's descriptions. : D