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1TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 30th December 2010, 7:16 pm

Skarloth

Skarloth

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TGC Prologue by Kpik Seven

The Great Beings sat in their conference chamber. The Chamber was circular, with a domed ceiling. The dome was painted with the most beautiful art, vivid images of animals that seemed almost alive, intriguing tools and blueprints were scattered all over it, it was a mural of Spherus Magna and everything in it. Only the land's greatest artists were allowed to even touch or add onto the large painting of their world. The actual room was built by the Great Beings themselves, and they put their own minds into it's architectural structure. Obviously, it was a very pleasant sight.

They had assembled to talk over a few things that had happened during the last month, such as what experiments had been concocted, how was the community and economy was doing? And more pressing matters such as the protection of Spherus Magna and it's people.

For most of the meeting, Angonce had been as silent as the desert itself, he let the others talk while he listened. It was interesting, he thought, how conversations could shift so quickly. A few other Great Beings had brought up other subjects; they were all eager to continue on with their inventions, as they had been set aside for important matters. Soon the conversation began to trail down that road. They began to get off the topic of more important things, much to Angonce's annoyance. Did they not realize that there was work to be done? And more important work, daresay, than petty experiments such as the ones they spoke of?

Angonce stood up from his seat, his powerful gaze drifting over the gathered Great Beings. "Enough of this. If one day our technical prowess is tested to its limit, will the small experiments of your conversations be enough to save Spherus Magna?"

The others fell silent, their expressions turning thoughtful. Angonce could tell he had struck the right chord with his words. "What if we tested our abilities to their full power? What if we built a machine more powerful than anything else we have built before?" Angonce continued.

A few others nodded in agreement at Angonce's words. But not everyone there was in love with the idea; some of the Great Beings spoke out loud in anger, obviously upset with such a proposal. "Angonce, have you lost your mind? You've contradicted yourself. If Spherus Magna is someday in danger, then how will this machine save us? What if it is something that a large or powerful creation cannot deal with due to it's size or power?" one Great Being asked.

"But what if it is? I am sure that the people could defend themselves against something on a smaller scale. As long as they were paired with our technological advancements, they would be completely unstoppable," Angonce said.

They began to debate further; some brought up the old topics again, and that they needed to consult on this and tinker with that, but the majority wanted to continue on with the idea of creating something larger than all of them, in both size and power.

Angone let the discussion carry on for a little while, but that 'discussion' quickly grew into an argument. He stood up again and put forth a vote: "We must decide if we ought to direct our resources toward such an undertaking. If we fail, that failure may go down in history as the folly of the Great Beings; but if we succeed, we may have the key to saving our world from any danger."

All who went with the movement to put their valuable resources to a new creation raised their right hand -- although Heremus raised two right hands -- and all opposed did not.

Angonce counted out the hands -- seven votes for and four against. The majority had it; the Great Beings would go through with this creation.

They still had one thing to debate upon; what would this creation be? One Great Being, Osavus, had an idea; it was to be a body, a gigantic mechanical being, made entirely of protosteel. Not surprisingly, Osavus did not have any idea what it would be for except another robot for labor.

That was when Ividior stepped up. He was a bit younger than the rest of the Great Beings at the meeting; although he thought wildly, and perhaps a bit madly, his ideas were vivid and worked with the real world. He took the floor and suggested that the creation would not be a mere body, but a world within a body. The idea was accepted as an experiment: they would not put anything living in the robot to run it, as any creations or laborers in there would all be destroyed if something went wrong. It would have to use a power source, but possibly be remotely controlled.

With that decided, Angonce called the meeting to a close. They would go over the rest of the planning some other day. This was, by all means, not a project to be rushed.


EDITED

So how is it now?

-Skar



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2TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 6th February 2011, 2:19 pm

Captain Marvel

Captain Marvel

MNI Author, MOCist, Musician

MNI Author, MOCist, Musician

I like the story, it's a good beginning, although I did find a few proofreading errors. My comments are in purple.

right hand,-although Heremus raised two right hands-and all

Delete the comma before although. If you're going to have something like that, it's better to have it with only dashes or only commas.

They still had one thing to debate upon. What would this creation be? Another Great Being, Osavus, had an idea. It was to be a body, a gigantic mechanical being,

The Idea was accepted, because it was an experiment, they could not put anything in there to run it, and any creations in there would all be destroyed if something went wrong.

This sentence is kind of awkward. I don't really understand what you're trying to say here, so could you clarify it a little?

and little by little,

What do you think about this?” the Great being asked. Heremus turned to him, but looked away, obviously thinking.

Hey you four! Get back to lifting those pieces! Come on, they’re not going to move themselves are they?”

Rohkea was traveling to the Great Volcano. She and a few others were on a hunt, a competition, trying to look for a specific type of Rahi (deleted stuff here) that was very difficult to find.

she could not tell (no comma) if it was their prey or another hunter

trying to get it with elemental powers.

This is Spherus Magna. There are no elemental powers.
-Captain Marvel

3TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 6th February 2011, 4:08 pm

HahliNuva

HahliNuva

AC 3D Modelling Leader

AC 3D Modelling Leader

This looks like a good prologue, but there are still some corrections that need to be made. I'll make the needed corrections and post the story (my corrections will be in red. Please tell me if this is allowed or not.)

TGC Prologue by Kpik Seven

The Great Beings sat in their conference chamber. It was not that large, only about 12’ by 12’ wide and long, a small box where the group could communicate with each other without others listening in or eavesdropping. They had assembled to talk over a few things, such as what had been done in the last month, how the community was doing, and more pressing matters such as the protection of Spherus Magna.

Some of the Great Beings had brought up other subjects; a few were eager to begin inventing once again, and the conversation began to trail down that road, and they began to get off of the original topic.
“What if we tested our abilities to their full power? What if we built a machine more powerful than anything else we have built before?” one Great Being, Angonce, suggested. A few others nodded in agreement, some spoke out and voiced their opinions, but not everyone there liked the idea. Some of them spoke out loud in anger in an attempt to get off of the subject.

They began to debate further. Several brought up the old topics again, and said that they needed to consult on this, but the majority wanted to continue on with the idea of creating something larger than all of them in size and in power. Before long, a vote was put forth. All who went with the movement to put their valuable resources to a new creation raised their right hand (although Heremus raised two right hands) and all opposed did not. The majority won; the Great Beings would go through with this creation.

However, they still had one thing to debate upon; what would this creation be? Another Great Being, Osavus, had an idea; it was to be a body, a gigantic mechanical being, made entirely of Protosteel. Not surprisingly, Osavus did not have any idea what it would be for except another robot for labor. That was when Ividior stepped up. Altough he was a bit younger than the rest, and even if he thought wildly (some would say madly), his ideas were vivid and worked in the real world.

He took the floor, and suggested that it would not be but a body, but a world that would act as a body. The idea was accepted because it was an experiment. Nobody was sure about what could be used to run it, and any creations in there would be destroyed if something within the "body" went wrong. Of course, it would need a reliable source of energy to power it,but it possibly be remotely controlled.

***

Angonce and Heremus stood atop a large scaffolding piece, looking out upon their Great Creation as it slowly came together. They had chosen to let some Agori and Construction Robots do the physical work, while the Great Beings designed it and pieced it together on paper. They had gotten the bottom left quadrant of the head done about two weeks later, and had started on the frame of the body. To them, this was a great accomplishment.

The two Great Beings watched as large mechanical pieces were hefted inside the head by large floating robots, and bit by bit, the robot would be completed. They were building it lying down, standing it up was far too dangerous. Angonce turned to Heremus, who continued to look out at the body of their creation.
“What do you think about this?” the Great Being asked. Heremus turned to him, but looked away, obviously thinking.

“Well, so far, we have had minimal injuries, and the construction is going quite smoothly and quickly. About this whole creation, well, I’m not to sure it’ll do well, and I’m not sure what we’ll do with it.” his brother replied. Heremus turned back to point down at a few Agori who were slacking. “Hey you four! Get back to lifting those pieces! Come on, they’re not going to move themselves, are they?” Heremus looked back at Angonce with a smile. Angonce returned the smile to Heremus as he walked away to oversee more of the construction.

***

Rohkea was traveling to the Great Volcano. She and a few others were on a hunt, a competition, trying to look for a type of Rahi that was very difficult to find. It was indigenous to the rocky area of the Volcano, and could be found nowhere else. She was working with a friend, and each of them had their bows strung and pointed ahead of them, waiting for a glimpse of the creature.

She had seen a bit of something flash by her, however she could not tell if it was their prey or another hunter. Each of them were the best of the best, and usually were able to move as the Rahi did to hide their positions. For a moment, the beast came out in plain sight. Everyone saw it, and everyone shot at it. It was curled up on a rock, but managed to dive out of the way of the speeding arrows before it was hit. The arrows bounced harmlessly off the rock, landing in the gravel.

It was on the run, trying to get away. Rohkea strung more arrows as well- that gave her a better chance to hit the beast if it was spotted. It was seen flying across the ground; or at least it seemed like it was flying, running along the gravel at such a speed that no one could catch up with it. Some of the other teams had brought out their other weapons, such as swords and staffs, trying in vain to get close enough to hit it.

That wasn’t exactly allowed. Rohkea had little time as she saw someone running closer to it, preparing to strike. She took aim as the beast slowed a bit, it must’ve been tired (who wasn’t in this heat?). Rohkea let her projectiles fly and heard a screech as the beast went down.

Each of the Glatorian there ran to the site. They saw the beast lying on the ground, dead. Rohkea picked it up, as it was small enough to carry in a pack, and stored it in her bag. She and her friend had won the competition, but no one was worried about that anymore; what they were looking at now was even more curious. What they saw was a body, a gigantic body lying down on the ground- or at least the frame of one. It had half a head and it seemed there were things working on it. The Glatorian stared in awe, trying to get a concept of what this could be. Rohkea only had one thing on her mind; this was not going to be good.

HN

4TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 6th February 2011, 8:07 pm

Legolover-361

Legolover-361

MNI COO

MNI COO

I'm aware I'm not a writer for this group, but I'm a proofreader. This suggestion may seem like stretching my proofreading powers a little, but believe me, it'll be for the better. Tongue

See, the problem with this prologue is how unclear it is. We don't know what the Great Beings are talking about, or why they're talking at all. So what you should do is explain a little more -- while following the 'show, don't tell' rule, of course.

Here, my edits are in blue (yay color-coding!). Take it from the runner-up of Biosector01 Contest 5: Sleeping Awake; getting into your characters' thoughts is a must.

And not only that; we need to have one character be the focus of each section. That way you can develop their personality from the start, as well as suggest how the other characters act.

Also, a twelve foot by twelve foot room isn't going to hold six to ten seven- to eight-foot Great Beings, so I've changed it to twenty-five feet -- which, by the way, would still be rather cramped. Tongue

-Didact- wrote:
The Great Beings sat in their conference chamber. It was not that large, only about twenty-five feet wide by twenty-five feet long, little more than a small box where they could communicate together without others listening in. They had assembled to talk over a few things that had happened during the last month: what experiments had been held, how the community was doing, and more pressing matters such as the protection of Spherus Magna.

For most of the meeting, Angonce had leaned back in his seat and let the others talk. It was interesting, he thought, how conversations could shift so quickly. A few other Great Beings had brought up other subjects; they, as well as a few of the others, were eager to begin inventing once again, so the conversation began to trail down that road. They began to get off the topic of more important things, much to Angonce's annoyance. Did they not realize that there was work to be done? And more important work, daresay, than petty experiments such as the ones they spoke of?
(paragraph break)
Angonce stood up from his seat, his powerful gaze drifting over the gathered Great Beings. "Enough of this. If one day our technical prowess is tested to its limit, will the small experiments of your conversations be enough to save Spherus Magna?"

The others fell silent, their expressions turning thoughtful. Angonce could tell he had struck the right chord with his words. "What if we tested our abilities to their full power? What if we built a machine more powerful than anything else we have built before?" Angonce continued.
(paragraph break due to change in subject)
A few others nodded in agreement at Angonce's words. But not everyone there was in love with the idea; some of the Great Beings spoke out loud in anger to attempt to get off of the subject.

They began to debate further; some brought up the old topics again, and that they needed to consult on this and tinker with that, but the majority wanted to continue on with the idea of creating something larger than all of them, in both size and power.
(paragraph break)
Angone let the discussion carry on for a little while, but that 'discussion' quickly grew into an argument. He stood up again and put forth a vote: "We must decide if we ought to direct our resources toward such an undertaking. If we fail, that failure may go down in history as the folly of the Great Beings; but if we succeed, we may have the key to saving our world from any danger."
(paragraph break)
All who went with the movement to put their valuable resources to a new creation raised their right hand -- although Heremus raised two right hands -- and all opposed did not.
(paragraph break)
Angonce counted out the hands -- five votes for and four against. The majority had it; the Great Beings would go through with this creation.

They still had one thing to debate upon; what would this creation be? One Great Being, Osavus, had an idea; it was to be a body, a gigantic mechanical being, made entirely of protosteel. Not surprisingly, Osavus did not have any idea what it would be for except antoher robot for labor.
(paragraph break)
That was when Ividior stepped up. He was a bit younger than the rest of the Great Beings at the meeting; although he thought wildly, and perhaps a bit madly, his ideas were vivid and worked with the real world. He took the floor and suggested that the creation would not be a mere body, but a world within a body. The idea was accepted as an experiment: they would not put anything in the robot to run it, as any creations in there would all be destroyed if something went wrong. It would have to use a power source, but possibly be remotely controlled.

With that decided, Angonce called the meeting to a close. They would go over the rest of the planning some other day. This was, by all means, not a project to be rushed.

Something about the paragraphs after this: It jumps too quickly to the building of the robot. I personally think the meeting scene should be extended to show not only more dialogue, but much of the inital planning for the robot.

I'll let everyone else take it from here.

5TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Approval 11th June 2011, 10:21 am

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

Sorry Kazi. Been long, but after finding no problem in the canon, and reading everyone improvements, I have to approve this particular text as the official TGC prologue:

Spoiler:

6TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 11th June 2011, 11:36 am

GoldenTahu

GoldenTahu

Their Mistake Story Manager

Their Mistake Story Manager

That's really nice, Rigs. I did find a few errors in it, though.

The description of the GB's conference chamber differs from mine in TM chapter 1. The number of GBs also differs greatly from that described in TM chapter 1. That chapter of Their Mistake was approved by you, so I am a bit confused.

And Protosteel does not exist at this time in history. Protosteel is a form of metallic protodermis, which has not been discovered yet. I would suggest something like iron or exsidian maybe.

7TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 11th June 2011, 11:56 am

Legolover-361

Legolover-361

MNI COO

MNI COO

GoldenTahu wrote:That's really nice, Rigs. I did find a few errors in it, though.

The description of the GB's conference chamber differs from mine in TM chapter 1. The number of GBs also differs greatly from that described in TM chapter 1. That chapter of Their Mistake was approved by you, so I am a bit confused.

If I recall correctly, The Grand Creation takes place far before the Core War, when the Great Beings built the prototype robot that exploded and had its parts scattered across Bara Magna. Since Their Mistake takes place long afterward, the differences you noted could easily have accumulated over the years.

8TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 11th June 2011, 12:14 pm

GoldenTahu

GoldenTahu

Their Mistake Story Manager

Their Mistake Story Manager

Nova Nebula wrote:
GoldenTahu wrote:That's really nice, Rigs. I did find a few errors in it, though.

The description of the GB's conference chamber differs from mine in TM chapter 1. The number of GBs also differs greatly from that described in TM chapter 1. That chapter of Their Mistake was approved by you, so I am a bit confused.

If I recall correctly, The Grand Creation takes place far before the Core War, when the Great Beings built the prototype robot that exploded and had its parts scattered across Bara Magna. Since Their Mistake takes place long afterward, the differences you noted could easily have accumulated over the years.
Yeah, that is true about the meeting chamber in their tower, but the number of GB's has to be about the same.

9TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 11th June 2011, 2:15 pm

Legolover-361

Legolover-361

MNI COO

MNI COO

GoldenTahu wrote:
Nova Nebula wrote:
GoldenTahu wrote:That's really nice, Rigs. I did find a few errors in it, though.

The description of the GB's conference chamber differs from mine in TM chapter 1. The number of GBs also differs greatly from that described in TM chapter 1. That chapter of Their Mistake was approved by you, so I am a bit confused.

If I recall correctly, The Grand Creation takes place far before the Core War, when the Great Beings built the prototype robot that exploded and had its parts scattered across Bara Magna. Since Their Mistake takes place long afterward, the differences you noted could easily have accumulated over the years.
Yeah, that is true about the meeting chamber in their tower, but the number of GB's has to be about the same.

Perhaps some Great Beings could have been promoted to or demoted from the leadership council since then? But you're right; we should try to equalize the number of Great Beings.

10TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 11th June 2011, 5:56 pm

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

Nice job about Protosteel; I'll have it changed to existian.

I have to agree with LL here. The GBs are supposed to come on Spherus Magna during Origins, and not settle down until the end of Altum Bellum, when the seven tribes form.

Since the Prototype robot was built before TM, actually many years before it, the Great Beings were bigger in numbers, and had greater power and place in the Spherus Magna society. They had the power and the resources to built anything they wanted, the people supported them, etc.

I'm afraid we have to make some modifications to TM chapter 1. I don't want you to re-write it. Maybe this was my mistake, but at the time TM takes place, the GBs have fallen.

They are in struggle to keep up with both their work and both their inventions, meanwhile many GBs were lost during TGC events; that will explain how they are more in TGC. (well, will be once I'm freaking done ith editing the chappie)

GT, I want you to edit the scene where the GBs talk, possibly making Angonce recall that the tower is growing old, and none cares, stuff like that. Make visible that they are in their worst days on SM, and that people don't trust them anymore.

Meanwhile, I'll change TGC prologue to have the same tower and room, but only newer.

Sorry everyone; I haven't checked the TGC for a long time and I need to revamp it a bit. Actually, the freaking storyboard is outer shenanigans. For the guy who says he's done work, he doesn't do anything nowadays Tongue

(oh and the approval is off Tongue)



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11TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 11th June 2011, 6:03 pm

Skarloth

Skarloth

MNI Board Member
MNI Board Member

I'm afraid we have to make some modifications to TM chapter 1. I don't want you to re-write it. Maybe this was my mistake, but at the time TM takes place, the GBs have fallen.

... shwa? I didn't know this.

I thought it was just a little while after TGC failed.

-Didact

12TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 11th June 2011, 6:15 pm

GoldenTahu

GoldenTahu

Their Mistake Story Manager

Their Mistake Story Manager

Sure I can edit chapter one of TM. Just a few questions. Currently the number of GBs is greater than that in this prologue, but that is only counting the cousel. As I wrote it in TM chapter 1, all GBs are on the counsel, because they are an a dying species(fits with TGC). Now we have to decide on the actual number of GBs in both serials.

I think a good idea would be to have only a few GBs on the counsel in TGC, but in TM, have them all on the counsel, because of fewer numbers. So maybe there could be between 50-75 GBs alive in TGC, with about 10 on the counsel. And in TM, close to 20 with all on the "counsel"(now just a meeting of all GBs).

And I can make the other changes in chapters 1 and 2 about the GBs losing power over time, but I would stress that in that time the Agori and Glatorian adopt a more mystified(and cautious because of that) view of them rather than pure hate. This also fits with the current TM prologue.

Please read and review TM chapters 2 and 3 ASAP. There's also something else on the tip of my tongue I need to mention, but I've forgotten now. Tongue

13TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 11th June 2011, 7:13 pm

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

50-75? Isn't that too much? It'd be more reasonable if they where like 35-40. Don't forget TGC and TM have a 50,234 years gap. A lot of stuff could have happened.

I think we could possibly fix this. In the ending of TGC, the robot explodes, killing some of the main Characters. We could use this to say many GBs died in that explosion.

14TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 11th June 2011, 7:16 pm

GoldenTahu

GoldenTahu

Their Mistake Story Manager

Their Mistake Story Manager

OK, that's a good number.

15TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 11th June 2011, 10:17 pm

Celu

Celu

MNI Board Chairman

MNI Board Chairman

GoldenTahu wrote:OK, that's a good number.

Ditto.

16TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 11th June 2011, 11:20 pm

GoldenTahu

GoldenTahu

Their Mistake Story Manager

Their Mistake Story Manager

I think whoever is writing TGC should remember that at this time the people of SM really do want the GBs as kings, like it says in All Our Sins Remembered. This is the part of the story where that trust starts corroding.

17TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 12th June 2011, 6:01 pm

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

That's exactly my new focus and new main idea, GT Tongue

Anyway, I've been putting events in a timeline, because I'm really not sure about the edits in the TM chapters, I'll have it figure out soon, I hope at least.

18TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 12th June 2011, 6:18 pm

GoldenTahu

GoldenTahu

Their Mistake Story Manager

Their Mistake Story Manager

I think I did everything you asked above, plus a little hint for later on in TM. I hope it works.

19TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 12th June 2011, 6:19 pm

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

I know; but I need to make sure everything I write for TGC is right.



-Didact- wrote:
I'm afraid we have to make some modifications to TM chapter 1. I don't want you to re-write it. Maybe this was my mistake, but at the time TM takes place, the GBs have fallen.

... shwa? I didn't know this.

I thought it was just a little while after TGC failed.

-Didact

Um... TM and TGC have a 50,234 years gap. Tongue

20TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 14th June 2011, 1:46 am

ValkyrieLightDragon

ValkyrieLightDragon

MNI Conceptual Artist

MNI Conceptual Artist

I'll check back here to make sure of when I'll need to record the TGC prologue. Smile

21TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 14th June 2011, 7:06 am

Riglax

Riglax

MNI CEO

MNI CEO

I know; that's why I haven't replied to your post. I and Kazi need to fix it it before you can record, then I need to write chapter one.

22TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 15th June 2011, 4:24 am

ValkyrieLightDragon

ValkyrieLightDragon

MNI Conceptual Artist

MNI Conceptual Artist

*thumbs up* I can wait, no stress. Smile

23TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 16th June 2011, 11:22 am

Skarloth

Skarloth

MNI Board Member
MNI Board Member

riglax toa of magnts wrote:I know; but I need to make sure everything I write for TGC is right.



-Didact- wrote:
I'm afraid we have to make some modifications to TM chapter 1. I don't want you to re-write it. Maybe this was my mistake, but at the time TM takes place, the GBs have fallen.

... shwa? I didn't know this.

I thought it was just a little while after TGC failed.

-Didact

Um... TM and TGC have a 50,234 years gap. Tongue

Apparently you don't realize how long I've been away from this, and how much thought I HAVEN'T put into it since I started that hiatus.

I really don't know what serial is in what time, or which came before which.

Well, not anymore.

Didn't you say somewhere you were making the finishing touches to Chappie onu?

-Didact

24TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] Empty Re: TGC Prologue! [Outdated version] 25th September 2011, 7:11 pm

Legolover-361

Legolover-361

MNI COO

MNI COO

This prologue was for the old plot; seeing as we're following a newer, better plot (and have been for the past four-five months Tongue), this topic can be locked.

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